初中中英文名师班96 满分15分，按中考作文批改评分并指出错误地方，请深圳中学老师帮批改。As a student, I often think about how to be a better person.For me, I'm get well in flowing the rule. I also like invent something and be interested in doing sports. This make me get well in the school life and have a healthy body. But I also not be enough in something, such my relationship. I couldn't get well in express myself and I couldn't make conversation with each other. This make me haven't lots of friends and often feel lonely. I can't fix my problems with each other in a good way this make me fell unhappy. To improve myself, I think I must keep my good points. I must keep to follow the rule and keep the invent interest. Also I must read much books. try much ways to improve my relationship! 学霸喵_473 4小时前 1 评论 0 喜欢
英文作文精批润色10篇 67.Paragraph1:Just as I was about to turn and run, two police officers arrived on the scene. No sooner did them saw the theme that I was avoid the attack of cow, than they wanted to use the gun. "No! it can't be effective." I shouted to the police officers in a serious tone and running tired. Suddenly, a red clothes attracted my attention. Catching the clothes, flowing it and running beside a tree, a idea echoed in my heart. "Come on, baby!" I told to the cow with tricky. It came with a big power to me, and then, the tree controlled its bones and the police officer used tools reduce the risk. What an unforgettable experience.Paragraph2:After we managed to secure the cow to a tree, we began to discuss what to do with it. Two police officers advice that the cow should be killed by the gun. I refused. My heart told me that I must made this creature alive. So nervous was me that my hands shaking quickly. The second chance, I did it. The cow became calm and the anger disappear. A sense of relaxing and tired hit me. But I gave my daughter a class. Every creature has the chance to live.Never before had I got such a unique experience, which was engraved in my mind and had a profound influence on my daughter in the rest of her life. 学霸君_177 7小时前 1 评论 0 喜欢
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