英语作文定制素材案例

1. 高分单词：

 

masterpiece (杰作) / classic (经典之作) / chronicle (记载；编年史) / depict (描绘) / protagonist (主角) / pilgrimage (朝圣之旅) / collaboration (合作) / surmount (克服) / adversity (逆境) / perseverance (毅力) / resilience (韧性) / captivating (引人入胜的) / compelling (令人信服的；引人入胜的) / narrative (叙事) / insight (深刻见解) / profound (深刻的) / allegorical (寓言的) / iconic (标志性的) / literary (文学的) / philosophical (哲学的)

 

2. 高分搭配：

 

a literary masterpiece (一部文学杰作) / a timeless classic (一部永恒的经典) / be steeped in (沉浸于) / revolve around (围绕…展开) / a household name (家喻户晓的名字) / the four protagonists (四位主角) / embark on a pilgrimage (踏上朝圣之旅) / surmount countless obstacles (克服无数障碍) / embody the spirit of (体现…的精神) / unwavering determination (坚定不移的决心) / a richly woven plot (情节编织丰富) / an allegorical tale (一个寓言故事) / offer a window into (提供一个了解…的窗口) / rich in symbolism (富含象征意义) / philosophical underpinnings (哲学基础) / cultural heritage (文化遗产) / stand the test of time (经受住时间的考验) / moral lessons (道德教训) / highly recommend (强烈推荐) / find it both entertaining and enlightening (发现它既有趣又有启发性)

 

3. 高分句型：

 

1. If I were to recommend one book that encapsulates the essence of Chinese folklore, it would undoubtedly be Journey to the West.

   （如果非要我推荐一本能体现中国民间传说精髓的书，那无疑就是《西游记》了。）

    点评： 虚拟语气，让推荐的口吻显得非常诚恳且高级。

 

2. The novel chronicles the epic pilgrimage of a Buddhist monk, Tang Sanzang, and his three disciples.

   （这部小说记载了高僧唐三藏和他三个徒弟史诗般的朝圣之旅。）

    点评： 用`chronicle`替代`tell the story of`，显得更具文学性。

 

3. At its core, the story is a testament to the power of perseverance and teamwork.

   （其核心在于，这个故事证明了毅力和团队合作的力量。）

    点评： `be a testament to...` 是“……的有力证明”，表达观点时非常有力。

 

4. What I find most captivating is not just the fantasy-filled adventures, but the profound moral lessons embedded within.

   （我发现最吸引人的不仅仅是充满幻想的冒险，更是其中蕴含的深刻道德教训。）

    点评： `What... is...` 强调句，能突出你最想表达的重点。

 

5. Through their collective efforts to surmount countless adversities, the characters exemplify virtues like loyalty, courage, and resilience.

   （通过克服重重逆境的共同努力，这些角色体现了忠诚、勇敢和坚韧等美德。）

    点评： 用一个长句清晰地说明了“如何体现”和“体现了什么”。

 

6. Beyond its engaging plot, the book offers profound insights into Chinese Buddhism, Taoism, and folk beliefs.

   （除了引人入胜的情节，这本书还为了解中国佛教、道教和民间信仰提供了深刻的见解。）

    点评： `Beyond..., ...` 结构，让文章层次更丰富。

 

7. It is a work that has stood the test of time, continuing to inspire and entertain readers for centuries.

   （这是一部经受住了时间考验的作品，几个世纪以来持续不断地激励和娱乐着读者。）

    点评： `...that has stood the test of time` 是个很地道的说法，用来形容经典事物。

 

8. Not only is the story an action-packed adventure, but it is also an allegorical journey of spiritual enlightenment.

   （这个故事不仅是一场动作连连的冒险，更是一场关于精神启迪的寓言之旅。）

    点评： `Not only... but also...` 的倒装用法，非常亮眼。

 

9. My confidence in recommending this book stems from its unique ability to be both wildly entertaining and deeply philosophical.

   （我之所以如此有信心地推荐这本书，源于它兼具极高的娱乐性和深刻的哲学性这一独特能力。）

    点评： 用`My confidence... stems from...` 来解释原因，比`I believe... because...` 更正式、更有力。

 

10. I am sure you will find this literary masterpiece as inspiring and enjoyable as I do.

   （我确信你会和我一样，发现这部文学杰作是如此鼓舞人心和充满乐趣。）

    点评： 在结尾处，用`literary masterpiece`这样的词来总结，提升了整本书的格调。