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Dear Chris，
I'm writing to share with you my volunteer in an animal shelter last saturday.

The activity started with a speech about helping animals delivered by an expert，Making as motivated.Among the activities, what impressed me most was feeding animals the event made us have close contact with animals，Which was Exceptionally well 一一received by both students body and the teachers， And it saw a substantial influx of Participants.

After an extended period of time ,we played with animals ,such as throwing balls for dogs to chase .

The event transcended expections, it's turned out to be a rewarding experience , from the event , which not only spiced up our school routine but also equiped us with useful everyday skills

Thanks for your attention I'm looking forward to your reply.