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第一段:设定目标与付诸行动
这一段主要用于描写主人公为了让某人开心,决定开始行动,并投入到具体的工作中。
Motivated by a strong desire to______, [Subject] immediately set about the task of______.
(中文注释:出于想做某事(如让爷爷开心)的强烈愿望,[主语]立刻着手开始了……的任务。)
Aware that______, [Subject] was determined to transform______ into ______ .
(中文注释:意识到……,[主语] 决心将……改造成……。)
Without a moment's hesitation, [Subject] devoted himself/herself to______, hoping to ______ .
(中文注释:毫不犹豫地,[主语]全身心投入到……中,希望能……。)
While [Subject A] was busy with______, [Subject B] occupied himself/herself with ______ .
(中文注释:当[主语A]忙于……时,[主语B]正忙着……。(用于描写分工合作))
第二段:克服困难与过程描写
这一段用于细致描写努力的过程,以及遇到的挑战和解决办法(对应你作文中找花种和种花的过程)。
The process of______ proved to be more arduous than expected, yet ______ .
(中文注释:……的过程比预想的要艰辛,然而……。)
Faced with the dilemma of______, they racked their brains and finally ______ .
(中文注释:面对……的困境,他们绞尽脑汁,终于……。)
Regardless of the sweat soaking their clothes, they continued to______, driven by ______ .
(中文注释:不管汗水湿透了衣服,他们继续……,被……所驱动着。)
It was not until______ that they managed to ______ .
(中文注释:直到……时候,他们才成功做到了……。)
______ as the work was, the anticipation of [person's] reaction kept them ______ .
(中文注释:尽管工作很……(如累人),但对[某人]反应的期待让他们保持……。)
第三段:揭晓惊喜与情感爆发
这是故事的高潮,描写亲人看到成果时的反应,重点在于面部表情、语言和肢体动作。
Leading [person] to______, [Subject] waited with bated breath for ______ .
(中文注释:领着[某人]来到……,[主语]屏息以待……。)
Upon catching sight of______, [person] stood rooted to the spot, his/her eyes ______ .
(中文注释:一看到……,[某人]呆立在原地,他/她的眼睛……。)
A wave of______ washed over [person] as he/she exclaimed, "______!"
(中文注释:一阵……(如感动/喜悦)涌上[某人]心头,他/她惊呼道:“……!”)
Tears of joy welled up in [person's] eyes when he/she realized ______ .
(中文注释:当他/她意识到……时,激动的泪水在眼眶中打转。)
Enveloping [Subject] in a warm embrace, [person] choked with emotion, "______."
(中文注释:将[主语]紧紧拥入怀中,[某人]哽咽着说:“……”。)
第四段:主题升华与感悟
文章的结尾,用来点题,就像你作文最后一句 "Indeed, a small act..." 一样,升华主题。
Watching the radiant smile on [person's] face, [Subject] felt a sense of ______ .
(中文注释:看着[某人]脸上灿烂的笑容,[主语]感到一种……感。)
It dawned on [Subject] that nothing compares to the happiness of ______ .
(中文注释:[主语]顿悟到,没有什么比……的快乐更无法比拟。)
Through this experience, they came to understand that love is not just about words, but ______ .
(中文注释:通过这次经历,他们明白了爱不仅仅是言语,更是……。)
Indeed, even the smallest act of kindness can cast a beam of light into ______ .
(中文注释:确实,即使是最微小的善举也能给……投下一束光。)

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