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As a student, I often think about how to be a better person.
For me, I'm get well in flowing the rule. I also like invent something and be interested in doing sports. This make me get well in the school life and have a healthy body.

But I also not be enough in something, such my relationship. I couldn't get well in express myself and I couldn't make conversation with each other. This make me haven't lots of friends and often feel lonely. I can't fix my problems with each other in a good way this make me fell unhappy.

To improve myself, I think I must keep my good points. I must keep to follow the rule and keep the invent interest. Also I must read much books. try much ways to improve my relationship!