请老师按中考作文批改评分，另外需要给出一些高级词和句式的替换，批改成满分作文，谢谢！
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Teamwork is very important and it helps us do what we can't do alone. I have an experience about teamwork.

Last term, I got a basketball competition game with my classmates. During this, I thought I can get goal by myself and never shared my ball. At last, we lost, I realised that how important the teamwork is, I should share my ball and play with my teammates. This term, I tried the basketball game again. This time, I shared the ball with my teammates. Someone defended, someone took the ball and someone threw it into the basket. In the end, we won and everyone is excited.

I had learnt that teamwork is important, it can make impossible turn into possible. No one can do everything without teamwork.