请按中考作文批改

Looking back at chinese history in one hundred years, lots of foreigners went to China and paid every effort for china's development, in my opinion, this phenomenon showed china's attraction.
First， China has delicious food and beautiful places of interest. Like the palace museum and the peking duck, foreigners can enjoy the beautiful scenery and tasty food.
Second, chinese people have the spirits of facing difficulties bravely and hardworking. Foreigners must be touched by their deep love to their motherland.
As teenagers, what we should do is studying harder and develop good habits from now on. Only in this can we make China more attractive.