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12年高中英语教学经验，英语备课组组长。6次参与上海市高考英语阅卷。独创“情景沉浸式”写作法，曾获“全国中学生英语能力竞赛优秀指导教师一等奖”、“上海市教学能手”、“‘希望之星’英语风采大赛金牌教练”等证书。
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高中英语作文51班
备注：作文复批ItwasAlice,whohadfollowedhimoutofcuriosity.Seeinghisbloodingknees,Alicesaid,"Dad,youhurtagain,whathappenedtoyou?"Immediately,Dadhidthebikeonhisback,withfaceflamingwithembarrassmentandshame.Hewantedtofindanexcuse,butAlicecontinuouscaringandaskinginspiredhim.DadtoldAlicewhathappenedtohimbefore,andhewantedtobeaperfectDad.NosoonerhadAliceheardthewordsthanshegaveherdadabighug."You'vedoneeverythingforus,anditwasperfect.""Youdon'tneedtobetooperfect,"sheadded.Atthesoundofthesewords,Dadsighedwithrelief,andsmiled.AlicehelpedDadkeepthesecretandexplainedtothefamily,andshealsoencouragedDadjointheminotherways,suchastakingphotosforthefamily.ThatSaturday,whenhisfamilywentbiking,Markstayedatthecampsitehappily.Thewindwitnessedhisworkonsettingupthecampandpreparationforbarbue.Excitedly,Dadalsotookthecameraandwasreadytorecordthebikingwinner.WhenAlicefirstlyrodetothecampsite,Dadcapturedthehappymomentforher,andthenfollowedBobandLena.Bobsaidthenexttimehewouldbethewinner!Everyonelaughed,andbegantoenjoythefoodwhichDadprepared.Alicesaiditwasthemostdeliciousbarbueshehadevenhaven,andBobnodded.Laughterfilledallthepark.ItdawnedonMarkthattheloveandunderstandingofthebestgift.Althoughhecouldn'tride,hehadtakenpartinthisactivityinthebestway.
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高中英语作文51班
StandUpandExercise,EverybodyEverybody,I'dlovetorecommendasport—runningtoallofyou,whichisbothsimpleandbenefit.Runningisoneofthesimplestsports,whichcanbecarryouteverywhere,suchastheroadinfrontofyourclassroomortheplayground.Also,ittakesyoumuchenergytohelpyourelaxandsweat.ThereasonwhyIrecommenditareasfollows.Tobeginwith,runningcanruntogetheratthesametime,anditdoesn'tneedtootherequipmenttofinishit.what'smore,itcantaketheleasttimetobringmoreeffects,only5minsrunningcanhelpyourefreshed.ThisismyrecommIdohopemyrecommendcanbeofsomehelp.Let'sstandupandexercise!
Wynne
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高中英语作文51班
备注作文复批Withdisappointment,Momnodded.GivingMomacomfortinghug,Alexsteppeduplikealittlemanandexplainedtheemergencytoeveryone.Thoughabriefsighofdisappointmentsweptthroughtheroom,itwasquicklyreplacedbyunderstandingnods.Then,Momservedthedeliciousdishes,andeveryonebeganthebigdinner.GuidedbyAlex'shumorousjokes,thediningroomechoedwithlaughter.Aroundthetable,theyhappilysharethehighlightsoftheiryears:Auntproudlysaidherson'sadmissiontouniversity,whileGrandpacelebratedhisfruitfulharvest.Thedinnerwentwarmly,thoughaseatleftemptyforDad.Hisuniformwascoveredinsnow,andhisfacewasredfromthefreezingwind.Sosurprisedandthrilledwerewethateveryonestoodupinstantly.Alexrushedtohim,helpinghimtakeoffhiscoat,whileMomquicklyhandedhimabowlofhotsoup.Dadapologizedforbeinglate."Itdoesn'tmatter.Weareallproudofyou!"Grandpasaidwithalovingsmile.Havingeatensomefood,Dadjoinedthecircleundertheredlantern.Lookingattheclocktickingtowardsmidnight,thewholefamilybegantocountdown,"Ten,nine,eight..."Followedbythefireworksoutside,cheersfortheNewYearlitupthehouse,makingameaningfulreunion.
Wynne
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高中英语作文51班
备注：作文复批Whenitcomestomyseniorthree,ifIhadtopickupawordtodescribeit,itwoulddefintelybe"Per-sistence".Thiswordsperfectlysummarizesmydailylifeinseniorhighthree.Physically,IconsistentlygotupearlytorecitewordsandworkedhardtosolveMathsproblem.Mentally,wheneverIfeltfrustrated,itwasthiswordthatencouragedmetokeepapositivemindandkepttrying.ThereasonwhyIchosethewordwasthatnotonlydiditwitnessedmysweatinhardwork,butalsomygrowthintheimportantstageoflife.Althoughgivingupiseasy,persistencemakesmestronger.Inaword,persistenceistheverywordthatbestdescribesmyseniorthree.
Wynne
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高中英语作文51班
"Whatareyoudoing?"Aliceaskedinaincrediblevoice.Dadstoodup,withlegshaking,touchedthebike,andfinallytoldwhathappenedonhischildhoodexperiencetoAlice.Hearingthese,AlicegaveDadabighug,sayingitdidn'tmatter,andhedidn'tneedtoridethebike.Dadnodedwithrelief.ThenAlicesaidhewastheperfectdadwhodideverythingforthefamily,andhecouldhelppreparethecampandtakephotosforthem.Ontheirwayhome,theytalkedhappily.Thedarkwitnessedtheirtalks.Enjoyingthescenryandbreathingthefreshair,Markpreparedthefoodforthefamilyandwaitedthem.Also,heusedthecameratotakephotosforthem.Afteranhourslater,Alicerodetothecampsite,excitedlysayingshewasthewinner.Markapplausedforher,andleadhertoeat.Then,BobandLenarodeback,theysaidtheywerethesecondone.Laughterslituptheground.Theyallhadpicnicandchattedwithhappiness.ItdawnedtoMarkthatsupportandunderstandingfromthefamilywasthebestgift.
Wynne
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