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英语作文批改润色半年+语文作文批改润色半年
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Afterfinishingmyhomework,Istretchedslightlyandglancedatthewarmsunsetoutsidethewindow,readytogooutforawalktorelaxmytiredeyes.JustasIputonmyshoes,myneighborMr.Greencalledmeinanxiety,hisvoicetremblingalittleoverthephone.Hesaidasmallfoxhadbeentrappedinthefenceofhisbackyard,anditwascryingpainfully,makinghisheartache.Iimmediatelygrabbedapairofthickcottonglovesandasofttowelfromtheshelf,thenrushedtohishouseasfastasIcould.WhenIarrived,Isawthelittlefoxhuddled(#E2F)tightlyinthecorneroftheironfence,itsfrontpaw(T7)firmlystuckbetweenthecoldironbars.Itsreddish-brownfurwasmessywithsomedirtanddrygrass,anditsbigeyeswerefilledwithfearandhelplessness.Mr.Greenstoodbesideme,lookingworried.Hetoldmehehadfoundthefoxtenminutesagowhilewateringflowers,andhedidn'tdaretomoveit,forfearofhurtingitspawormakingitmorefrightened.Ikneltdowngently,keepingmyvoicesofttocalmthefoxdown.Itlookedatmewithcaution,itsbodytremblingslightlyandstrugglingnowandthen,butitcouldn'tgetfreeatall.Iputontheglovesandcheckeditspawcarefully,findingasmallcutwithalittleblood,butnoseriousinjury.Iwantedtofreeitcarefully,butIdidn'tknowthebestwaytoavoidhurtingit.Mr.Greenheldaflashlighttohelpmeseeclearly,hishandsalsoalittleshaky.Webothfeltanxious-neitherofushaddealtwithsuchasituationbefore,nordidweknowanythingaboutthefox'shabits.Wejusthopedwecouldfreethepoorlittleguysafelyassoonaspossible.(1)续写词数应为150个左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。"Whynotlookupthecorrectwaytofreeatrappedfoxonline?"suggestedMr.Green."Goodideas!"Iagreed.Wetookanactiontolookuphowtoaddresstheproblemimmediately.Followingthecorrectway’sexample,Icarefullyapproachedthefox'sstruckpawandslowlymovedthenearbyironfence,Inthemeanwile,Mr.Greenwaspatientlycomfortingthesmallfoxingentlevoice.AlthoughmyhandstrembledgreatlyasImovedthefence.Itriedmybesttocalmmedownandconcentratedonthemovement.Luckily,thefoxmanagedtodrawitspawwhenImovedthefence,anditdisappearedinthebackyard.Severaldayslater,Mr.Greencalledmeexcitedlyandaskedmetogotohisbackyard.IsawthafoxinhisbackyardwhenIarrivedMr.Green'shome.AferhearingtheexpainationofMr.Green,Irecognisedthefoxwhowassavedbyusthatday.Thesmallfoxbroughtseveralpotatoesfromits'home,whichseemedtoexpressitsThanks.Thedaywasameaningfuldayforeveryone,notjustbecansewereceivedagift,butbecansewemanagedtosavealife.
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破情感桎梏,守心中淡泊几十年前,梁启超先生曾讲道“世间本无事,庸人自扰之”,所谓乐忧惊喜,全都源于内心情感。诚哉斯言,从道家思想来看,世间万物运行发展都遵循其客观规律,而人之情绪起伏变化,皆是因被情感裹挟,若想发展与前行,当有“不以物喜,不以己悲”的泰然处世。时代霄壤嬗变,当代人应破情感桎梏,守心中淡泊,才能行稳至远。回溯历史的雪泥鸿爪,遍览岁月的丹青长卷,淡然早已在历史长河中留下的浓浓墨香。苏轼不因屡屡受贬而忧,寄情山水以悦愉自我,在苏州杭州、澹州为百姓谋福祉以实现自我;王勃不因白发遍布,不得志而惊,于滕王阁诵道“老当益壮,宁移白首之心;穷且益坚,不坠青云之志”;李商隐不因玉树后庭花而乐,而是认清现变,为国家积贫积弱所担心,为国家复兴而奉献力量。他们不被情感所左右,而是守望内心的淡泊,不被重用仍要为民造福,实现自我;一生坎坷仍不忘内心为国效力、报国之志;朝廷玩乐无度,百姓苦不堪言,身为国家臣子守住职守,为国整顿,竭忠尽力。明代长河奔涌,社会发展进步,梁启超先生所讲也应为当代人提供启示。然而,当下不少青年被情感左右,一遇挫折失意便忧心忡忡,堕落于躺平,小小的成功便喜乐无度,难以应对接下来的挑战。守望内心淡泊应如樊锦诗般扎根敦煌,不因处境不顺而忘记为国守护文明的初心;不被情绪易志当如石宇奇不畏挫折,无论赛场失利,或是身体受伤而喜忧,坚持内心淡泊,为国羽注入活力,推动发展。中华民族正经历着百年未有之变局,国际形势动荡,而伟大复兴的中国梦还尚未实现,一代人有一代人的责任,一代人有一代人的长征路,青年人应接过时代的接力棒,将个人奋斗的目标嵌入国家发展的经纬,不被情感所扰,不作庸人,守住内心的宁静与淡泊,便没有翻不过去的山,跨不过去的坎。托尔斯泰曾说过:“世间的一切变化,一切魅力,一切美都由光与影组成。”我想,破除情感桎梏,守望内心淡泊就恰似这光与影,让我们持就这光与影的魅力,绘就个人成长与国家发展的灿烂篇章。阅读下面的材料,根据要求写作。(60分)梁启超说:“天下之境,无一非可乐、可此、可惊、可喜者,实无一可乐、可悦、可惊、可喜着。乐之、忧之、惊之、喜之,全在人心,所谓天下本无事,庸人自扰之梁启超先生的名言引发了你怎样的联想和思考?请联系社会生活,写一篇文章,谈谈你的认识与思考。要求:选准角度,确定立意,明确文体,自拟标题;不要套作,不得抄袭;不得泄露个人信息;不少于800字。
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老师这个没判第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenwemovedtoafarmintheHighRockies,Iwasthrilledtoliveamongthewildlife.Everydaywasamountainsafari:Aspottedcatrestedinatree.Deerthunderedpastthewindowatnight.Abaldeagleflewintheclouds.Itwasalljustheavenly!UntilIplantedagarden.Thetulipsneverstoodachance.Afterplanting,IbegansearchingforsignsoftheminApril.IwaitedimpatientlyuntilthelastsnowstormfinishedinMay-lateMay.Stillnotulips.Curious,Idecidedtodigthemup.Hadtheyfrozen?No,theyweregone.Intheirplacewasanetworkoftunnels.Apparently,theseedshadprovidedafancyrodent(啮齿动物)dinner.Idecidedtogetserious.Iconsultedexpertsatthelocalgardencenter.ThenIdugdown12inchestoseatthewirenetsunderground,blockingthedigginginvaders.Fullofhope,Icongratulatedmyselfonajobwelldone.Mychildrenevenputalittlesigntoremindthetinyrobbersnottoeattheseplants.Buttheywereuselessforthechipmunks(花栗鼠).Theydashedinandoutofthetinyholesinthenets,totallyignoringthehopelessbarrier.Offtheycarriedtheirdeliciousfood.Tulipswouldneverrecover!Butit'sagoodthingchipmunksaresoadorable.Ispottedonedrinkingfromarecentlywateredleaf.Awwww!Butatthethoughtofmydreamgarden,Igrewmoredetermined.Attheadviceofonefriend,Ilaidoutpilesofchickenfeathers.Atthesuggestionofmychildren,Ispreadoutmassesoffurfromourdogafterhersummershave.Thechipmunksdidn'tcare.Inafloodofdesperation,Ireturnedtothegardencenter."Thewildlife!"Icomplained.Iwaslostinthesorrowofdefeat.Theotherday,whilewedidlaundry,Iwasstillwonderingaboutanotherroundoftulipsurvivaldreamandthinkinghardtodriveawaymyunpleasantplanteatingneighbours.Ipassedourslidingglassdoorswithmychildrenandsawatouchingscene.Amommychipmunkwasnursingherfivebabies.Wewerebrainstormingwaystohelpthechipmunks.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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