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Hellodearprofessors,Whatdoesabordersoundlike?InmyhometownYunnan,itsoundslikemarketvendorsswitchingbetweendialects,andthesoftrhythmofBurmesejustacrosstheriver.Igrewupthere—andconfirmeddeeply:languagewasmyfirstbridge.ThatbridgetraveledwithmetoEngland.Onesun-drenchedafternoonontheWindermereschoolbus,IsharedtheDreamoftheRedChambertoaGermangirl—thelove,thepoetry,andthetragedyofit.WhilegainingadeeperunderstandingofChineseculture,shealsosharedwithmeherhometown,Hamburg.Inthatmutualconnectivemoment,Irealized:culturemovedfromonehearttoanother,gentlyyetpowerfully.BackinSoutheastAsia,Englishbecamemyeverydaytool.SnorkelingoffMalaysia'scoast,orderingfoodatanightmarket,checkinandcheckout—everysmallinteractionwhisperedback:Youbelonganywhere.Moreover,athome,Threeyears,IreadAllsevenHarryPotterbooks.FallinginlovewiththecozyBritishphrases,themagicwovenintoandconjuredinfrontofmyeyes.Indeed,thatobsessiongavemesomethingreal:awritingabilitythatstandsout.NowIalsoreadTheAtlanticandTheNewYorker—alwaysbewillingtolistenhowtheworldthinks.Adherently,IamaTaylorSwiftenthusiast,aprotegeofherpen.FromwhereIlearnedstorytellingandtheconfidencetospeakout.SowhyBFSU?BecauseIamsomeonewholovestherollofatrillandtheinterestofaforeignvowel.Thisisalsotheechoofmypersonalpassionandbelonging--goingoutfromBFSUlikeatreesendingbranchesinalldirections,betweenmyborderlandhomeandeveryhorizonbeyond.Iwillserve.Iwillbridge.Iwillgivemylightandheat—tostandwhereEastmeetsWest,tolettheworldhearChina,toprotectthediversityofhumanvoices,andtolovelanguagelikeariver—quietlyflowing,shapingeveryseasonofmylife.我是高三学生，现需参加北外的综合评价，需要一篇两分钟以内的自我介绍，上面内容还差15秒到两分钟，请修改一下词汇和句子，删减哪一些内容。中午12点前反馈给我一下，谢谢。
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