重點要求
1.目前托福考試兩次為21.22分.出現提分困難問題.急需快速提分.距離下次考試還剩下兩周.希望可以快速提分到28
2.下方內容是我本周自行練習的結果.平時準備方式是透過背誦固定用法.自寫+ai批改模式.比較不清楚自己卡分的問題點.以及提分到28所需的準備方向
3.希望能透過老師的批改得知目前的問題卡點+2周內提分.具體需要我努力的方向為何? 目前我為全職備考.願意為作文多付出時間準備.只要能提分到28就行!目標相當明確.

When it comes to whether to close zoos, the answer is always debatable. Although many people concern about the living conditions that harm animals, others consider it a pivotal chance to serve as biological learning resources for students. Considering hardly could children have a close observation of wild species, zoos provide this irreplaceable and valuable chance. For instance, instead of going out for shopping with adults at weekends, parents choose zoos to be the educational sites that exhibit content in interesting ways for inquisitive kids. Moreover, aside from students, scientists systematically collect animal-related evidence from daily observations, allowing them to delve into ecological research, which might revolutionize conservation ecology in the future. Although Scarlett mentions the inappropriate habitats that animals face, she overlooks the fact that this problem can be minimized through advanced environmental management, such as AI-powered habitat monitoring systems.