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Theissueofthebeststrategytoalleviateurbanheateffecthaslongbeendebated.Giventhatthefundamentalprincipleoftacklingaproblemistodecreaserootcauses,Ibelievetheimportanceofeliminatingthedischargeofcarbondioxidecannotbeoverstated.Inthisregard,greentax,whichcanlargelycurbcarbonemissions,guidessociety,enablingpeopletoenjoyabetterlivingcondition.Therefore,individualsbehavediverselyandeffectivelyinordertocutdowncosts.Forinstance,whileprivatecarownersswitchtotakebusesratherthandrivetheirgas-poweredcars,factoriesarefinanciallymotivatedtoinvestineco-friendlyenergyinnovation,likebiofuels,duetotheheavytaxes.AlthoughJennamentionsthevalueofcoolingeffectsthatwatersbringabout,sheoverlooksthefactthataddressingtherootcauseofthepredicamentisobviouslythesustainablesolution,whichhasthepotentialtocreateavirtuouscycle.
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托福写作批改润色20篇
Whenitcomestomakinghowmanyfriends,theanswerisalwaysdebatable.Consideringnowadays,peoplearebusyattheirworksandseldomhavemuchtime,itisadvisabletomakeonlyafewcongenialcompanions.In-depthtalksaresignificantsinceindividualsallwanttobeauthenticallyunderstood.Therefore,withlimitedtime,peoplecanspendmoretimeonknowingeachfriend,andhigh-valuefriendshipshavethechancetobedeveloped.Moreover,afewintimatefriendseliminatethedecision-makingpressure.Forinstance,whenIwasacollegestudent,Iwassoconfusedofpickingwhichcompaniontohavemyheart-to-hearttalksbecauseIwasafraidthattherewouldbejealousemotionbetweenfriends.AlthoughJoshuamentionsdiverseperspectivesthatpeoplecanacquirewhilemakingmanyfriends,heoverlooksthefactthatwithlimitedtime,itismoreefficienttoreadbooks.重点要求1.目前托福考试两次为21.22分.出现提分困难问题.急需快速提分.距离下次考试还剩下两周.希望可以快速提分到282.下方内容是我本周自行练习的结果.平时准备方式是透过背诵固定用法.自写+ai批改模式.比较不清楚自己卡分的问题点.以及提分到28所需的准备方向3.希望能透过老师的批改得知目前的问题卡点+2周内提分.具体需要我努力的方向为何?目前我为全职备考.愿意为作文多付出时间准备.只要能提分到28就行!目标相当明确.
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托福写作批改润色20篇
重點要求1.目前托福考試兩次為21.22分.出現提分困難問題.急需快速提分.距離下次考試還剩下兩周.希望可以快速提分到282.下方內容是我本周自行練習的結果.平時準備方式是透過背誦固定用法.自寫+ai批改模式.比較不清楚自己卡分的問題點.以及提分到28所需的準備方向3.希望能透過老師的批改得知目前的問題卡點+2周內提分.具體需要我努力的方向為何?目前我為全職備考.願意為作文多付出時間準備.只要能提分到28就行!目標相當明確.Whenitcomestowhethertoclosezoos,theanswerisalwaysdebatable.Althoughmanypeopleconcernaboutthelivingconditionsthatharmanimals,othersconsideritapivotalchancetoserveasbiologicallearningresourcesforstudents.Consideringhardlycouldchildrenhaveacloseobservationofwildspecies,zoosprovidethisirreplaceableandvaluablechance.Forinstance,insteadofgoingoutforshoppingwithadultsatweekends,parentschoosezoostobetheeducationalsitesthatexhibitcontentininterestingwaysforinquisitivekids.Moreover,asidefromstudents,scientistssystematicallycollectanimal-relatedevidencefromdailyobservations,allowingthemtodelveintoecologicalresearch,whichmightrevolutionizeconservationecologyinthefuture.AlthoughScarlettmentionstheinappropriatehabitatsthatanimalsface,sheoverlooksthefactthatthisproblemcanbeminimizedthroughadvancedenvironmentalmanagement,suchasAI-poweredhabitatmonitoringsystems.
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