托福學術寫作作文批改，請根據題目（附照片）進行精修，考試時間只有10分鐘，請將此條件納入總體字數考量（學生可寫速度在160以內）The issue of whether taking risk for personal growth has sparked a heated debate. Given that not only do risks provide opportunities, but they also pose challenges, it is advisable to run risk in order to experience as well as to conquer. For instance, five years ago, I organized a negotiation with the counterparty company for my boss. Deeply as I understood that if the communication was not well-structured or the cooperation was not achieved, I might be fired. However, I wanted to try for the purpose of demonstrating my ability. Finally, I succeeded, leading to the final profit increased by 20%, and I also got promoted to a higher position to shoulder larger responsibility. As a result, the profound impacts on self-learning from risks cannot be overstated to me, which the risks allow me to act properly in every meetings with confidence. Although I partially agree with Claire that taking too many risks can negatively harm oneself, she overlooks the fact that the overall advantages outweigh the flaws since minor risks are manageable and have a lower chance to get hurt, while others might matter a lot both in benefits and bad sides.