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老师你好我是高三学生这是我整理的续写程序，困境—做解决是第一段，解决后开始是第二段。我这几次考试都是照着这个写只要写完20没问题，我最近又改进了一下这是最终版本。我经常做不完卷子练了一百套了考试还是只有25分钟写续写，我故事构思能力弱考场容易很紧张且语法基础很差，这套程序写起来轻松速度快且可以减少我的语法错误，可以说拯救了我的续写。因为我总写不完第二段所以第二段框架中升华后我还加了环境因为这个思考少我可以快速写完，但我担心这样会不会被认定为情节太少甚至套作导致印象分很低。所以请教一下老师我这个写作程序有没有什么硬伤需要注意的，还有如果老师觉得不好也请委婉一点因为到现在我不可能大改程序了且不想影响写作信心，我的目标分数是20，最近也在不断磨合提速。谢谢老师，我看上一篇图片看不清这次发一下pdf
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英文作文精批润色10篇
老师你好我是高三学生这是我整理的续写程序，困境—做解决是第一段，解决后开始是第二段。我这几次考试都是照着这个写只要写完20没问题，我最近又改进了一下这是最终版本。我经常做不完卷子练了一百套了考试还是只有25分钟写续写，我故事构思能力弱考场容易很紧张且语法基础很差，这套程序写起来轻松速度快且可以减少我的语法错误，可以说拯救了我的续写。因为我总写不完第二段所以第二段框架中升华后我还加了环境因为这个思考少我可以快速写完，但我担心这样会不会被认定为情节太少甚至套作导致印象分很低。所以请教一下老师我这个写作程序有没有什么硬伤需要注意的，还有如果老师觉得不好也请委婉一点因为到现在我不可能大改程序了且不想影响写作信心，我的目标分数是20，最近也在不断磨合提速。谢谢老师
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英文作文精批润色10篇
67.Paragraph1:JustasIwasabouttoturnandrun,twopoliceofficersarrivedonthescene.NosoonerdidthemsawthethemethatIwasavoidtheattackofcow,thantheywantedtousethegun."No!itcan'tbeeffective."Ishoutedtothepoliceofficersinaserioustoneandrunningtired.Suddenly,aredclothesattractedmyattention.Catchingtheclothes,flowingitandrunningbesideatree,aideaechoedinmyheart."Comeon,baby!"Itoldtothecowwithtricky.Itcamewithabigpowertome,andthen,thetreecontrolleditsbonesandthepoliceofficerusedtoolsreducetherisk.Whatanunforgettableexperience.Paragraph2:Afterwemanagedtosecurethecowtoatree,webegantodiscusswhattodowithit.Twopoliceofficersadvicethatthecowshouldbekilledbythegun.Irefused.MyhearttoldmethatImustmadethiscreaturealive.Sonervouswasmethatmyhandsshakingquickly.Thesecondchance,Ididit.Thecowbecamecalmandtheangerdisappear.Asenseofrelaxingandtiredhitme.ButIgavemydaughteraclass.Everycreaturehasthechancetolive.NeverbeforehadIgotsuchauniqueexperience,whichwasengravedinmymindandhadaprofoundinfluenceonmydaughterintherestofherlife.
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英文作文精批润色10篇
第二节读后续写（满分25分）67.Paragraph1:JustasIwasabouttoturnandrun,twopoliceofficersarrivedonthescene.NosoonerdidthemsawthethemethatIwasavoidtheattackofcow,thantheywantedtousethegun."No!itcan'tbeeffective."Ishoutedtothepoliceofficersinaserioustoneandrunningtired.Suddenly,aredclothesattractedmyattention.Catchingtheclothes,flowingitandrunningbesideatree,aideaechoedinmyheart."Comeon,baby!"Itoldtothecowwithtricky.Itcamewithabigpowertome,andthen,thetreecontrolleditsbonesandthepoliceofficerusedtoolsreducetherisk.Whatanunforgettableexperience.Paragraph2:Afterwemanagedtosecurethecowtoatree,webegantodiscusswhattodowithit.Twopoliceofficersadvicethatthecowshouldbekilledbythegun.Irefused.MyhearttoldmethatImustmadethiscreaturealive.Sonervouswasmethatmyhandsshakingquickly.Thesecondchance,Ididit.Thecowbecamecalmandtheangerdisappear.Asenseofrelaxingandtiredhitme.ButIgavemydaughteraclass.Everycreaturehasthechancetolive.NeverbeforehadIgotsuchauniqueexperience,whichwasengravedinmymindandhadaprofoundinfluenceonmydaughterintherestofherlife.
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英文作文精批润色10篇
officersarrivedonthescene.NosoonerdidthemsawthethemethatIwasavoidtheattackofcow,thantheywantedtousethegun."No!itcan'tbeeffective."Ishoutedtothepoliceofficersinaserioustoneandrunningtired.Suddenly,aredclothesattractedmyattention.Catchingtheclothes,flowingitandrunningbesideatree,aideaechoedinmyheart."Comeon,baby!"Itoldtothecowwithtricky.Itcamewithabigpowertome,andthen,thetreecontrolleditsbonesandthepoliceofficerusedtoolsreducetherisk.Whatanunforgettableexperience.Paragraph2:Afterwemanagedtosecurethecowtoatree,webegantodiscusswhattodowithit.Twopoliceofficersadvicethatthecowshouldbekilledbythegun.Irefused,MyhearttoldmethatImustmadethiscreaturealive.Sonervouswasmethatmyhandsshakingquickly.Thesecondchance,Ididit.Thecowbecamecalmandtheangerdisappear.Asenseofrelaxingandtiredhitme.ButIgavemydaughteraclass:Everycreaturehasthechancetolive.NeverbeforehadIgotsuchauniqueexperience,whichwasengravedinmymindandhadaprofoundinfluenceonmydaughterintherestofherlife.
学霸君_177
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