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67.Paragraph1:JustasIwasabouttoturnandrun,twopoliceofficersarrivedonthescene.NosoonerdidthemsawthethemethatIwasavoidtheattackofcow,thantheywantedtousethegun."No!itcan'tbeeffective."Ishoutedtothepoliceofficersinaserioustoneandrunningtired.Suddenly,aredclothesattractedmyattention.Catchingtheclothes,flowingitandrunningbesideatree,aideaechoedinmyheart."Comeon,baby!"Itoldtothecowwithtricky.Itcamewithabigpowertome,andthen,thetreecontrolleditsbonesandthepoliceofficerusedtoolsreducetherisk.Whatanunforgettableexperience.Paragraph2:Afterwemanagedtosecurethecowtoatree,webegantodiscusswhattodowithit.Twopoliceofficersadvicethatthecowshouldbekilledbythegun.Irefused.MyhearttoldmethatImustmadethiscreaturealive.Sonervouswasmethatmyhandsshakingquickly.Thesecondchance,Ididit.Thecowbecamecalmandtheangerdisappear.Asenseofrelaxingandtiredhitme.ButIgavemydaughteraclass.Everycreaturehasthechancetolive.NeverbeforehadIgotsuchauniqueexperience,whichwasengravedinmymindandhadaprofoundinfluenceonmydaughterintherestofherlife.
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第二节读后续写(满分25分)67.Paragraph1:JustasIwasabouttoturnandrun,twopoliceofficersarrivedonthescene.NosoonerdidthemsawthethemethatIwasavoidtheattackofcow,thantheywantedtousethegun."No!itcan'tbeeffective."Ishoutedtothepoliceofficersinaserioustoneandrunningtired.Suddenly,aredclothesattractedmyattention.Catchingtheclothes,flowingitandrunningbesideatree,aideaechoedinmyheart."Comeon,baby!"Itoldtothecowwithtricky.Itcamewithabigpowertome,andthen,thetreecontrolleditsbonesandthepoliceofficerusedtoolsreducetherisk.Whatanunforgettableexperience.Paragraph2:Afterwemanagedtosecurethecowtoatree,webegantodiscusswhattodowithit.Twopoliceofficersadvicethatthecowshouldbekilledbythegun.Irefused.MyhearttoldmethatImustmadethiscreaturealive.Sonervouswasmethatmyhandsshakingquickly.Thesecondchance,Ididit.Thecowbecamecalmandtheangerdisappear.Asenseofrelaxingandtiredhitme.ButIgavemydaughteraclass.Everycreaturehasthechancetolive.NeverbeforehadIgotsuchauniqueexperience,whichwasengravedinmymindandhadaprofoundinfluenceonmydaughterintherestofherlife.
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officersarrivedonthescene.NosoonerdidthemsawthethemethatIwasavoidtheattackofcow,thantheywantedtousethegun."No!itcan'tbeeffective."Ishoutedtothepoliceofficersinaserioustoneandrunningtired.Suddenly,aredclothesattractedmyattention.Catchingtheclothes,flowingitandrunningbesideatree,aideaechoedinmyheart."Comeon,baby!"Itoldtothecowwithtricky.Itcamewithabigpowertome,andthen,thetreecontrolleditsbonesandthepoliceofficerusedtoolsreducetherisk.Whatanunforgettableexperience.Paragraph2:Afterwemanagedtosecurethecowtoatree,webegantodiscusswhattodowithit.Twopoliceofficersadvicethatthecowshouldbekilledbythegun.Irefused,MyhearttoldmethatImustmadethiscreaturealive.Sonervouswasmethatmyhandsshakingquickly.Thesecondchance,Ididit.Thecowbecamecalmandtheangerdisappear.Asenseofrelaxingandtiredhitme.ButIgavemydaughteraclass:Everycreaturehasthechancetolive.NeverbeforehadIgotsuchauniqueexperience,whichwasengravedinmymindandhadaprofoundinfluenceonmydaughterintherestofherlife.
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TreasureOurLibraryBooks:ASharedResponsibilityBoysandgirls,aphenomenonhasbeenshowedinourschoollibrary.Manybooksarefoldedthecorner,whichactioncanconstructourbooks.WritingonthebookswithstraightlinealsodamagesourbooksNotonlyaretheseactionsnotbenefitforprotectingbooks,butalsoreflecttheloseofresponsibility.So,howcanwesolvethisproblem!Firstatall,theactionoffoldingthecornercanbereplacedbyusingsomethingtorememberthepages.It'sagoodactiontoourbooks.Then,enhanceourawarenessofprotectingourbooks,usingmorereasonablemethodtoreceiveknowledge.Thelastbutnotleast,weneedtoprohibitthisactionsandmakesomerulestorestrictthedifferentsituationwhichdamagesourbooks.Everyeffortcounts,Ibelievealittlechangecanmakeabigdifferenceinourlibrary.
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人们在获得一些新的东西时,也有可能失去另一些东西。互联网为人们的生活带来了不少便捷,那么人们可能会失去什么呢?就这个问题进行深入思考。写一篇不少于800字的文章,题目自拟
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