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高三语文作文:23.阅读下面的材料,根据要求写作。2026年,红军长征胜利90周年。伟大的长征精神,是全党全国各族人民不断砥砺前行的强大精神动力,已深深融入中华民族的血脉和灵魂。一代人有一代人的长征,一代人有一代人的担当。这个时代,我们的新征程就是新的长征。以上材料引发了你怎样的联想和思考?请以“我们的新长征”为题写一篇文章。要求:选准角度,确定立意,明确文体;不要套作,不得抄袭;不得泄露个人信息;不少于800字。我写的:题目:我们的新长征伟大的长征精神,是全党全国各族人民不断砥砺前前的伟大精神动力,已深深融入中华民族的血脉与灵魂。一代人有一代人的长征,一代人有一代人的担当,这个时代,我们的新征程就是延续前人的长征精神,继续为了祖国的强大接续奋斗。我们的新征程的实现需要坚持不懈的长征精神。全红婵年纪轻轻就开始练习跳水,很快就被教练发现了她身上的天赋,但仅有天赋不够,还要有敢于吃苦的坚持不懈精神,这使她后来成功在各大比赛上夺得桂冠。她每天只吃一顿,然后要进行大量的体能训练和动作练习,并且还要兼顾学业。面对沉重的负担,全红婵没有半徒而废,而是坚持了好多年的长征精神,最终得以发光发热。因此我们要学会坚持不懈,这样才能实现梦想。我们的新征程的实现需积极乐观的精神态度。庞众望就是一个面对困难不退缩的一个积极乐观的人。庞众望刚出生时就要面对残疾和有精神病的父母,因此他从小就要有负起很多责任,从小就要帮家里洗衣做饭,照顾父母,而且还要兼顾学业。但是他面对这样的家庭环境,庞众望毫不抱怨,每天积极乐观,并表示他为他的父母感到骄傲,为可以和父母每天生活在一起而感到开心。庞众望就这样凭借积极乐观的长征精神最终成功实现梦想,圆梦清华。因此我们要学习他这种不畏困难、积极向上的人生态度。我们的新程的实现需要能够冷静面对突发状况的长征精神。袁隆平在对杂交水稻探索时期有一次意外,好不容易有点眉目的稻田实验区被人恶意破坏,相当于白费功夫,要重新大干一场。但是袁隆平面对这一意外事件没有就此陷入慌乱,而是冷静分析突发情况,寻找合适的补救方法,最终成功克服困难,推动了杂交水稻的进一步杂交水稻的进一步发展。因此我们要学习这种临危不乱的长征精神。作为新时代青年的我们,要继续弘扬长征精神。面对学习和别的兴趣爱好要坚持不懈,不要三分钟热度。在看不到坚持的成效时也不要因此萎蘼不振,在看到突发状况时也不要只做热锅上的蚂蚁,而是要快速冷静下来思考解决方法,只慌张不补救只会越来越糟。我们中国能有今天,离不开长征精神的弘扬与发展。让我们继续用长征精神为建设伟大中国贡献力量,完成我们这一代的使命与担当。
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高三英语读后续写Everydayafterschool/LucasandNoahpressedtheirnosesagainst-Vir.Henderson'sshopwindow.Theystaredattheredbicyclethatstoodproudlyinthecenterofthedisplay.Formonths,theyhadsavedeverysparecoin,yetthepricestillseemedfarbeyondtheirreach.Whenthefirstsnowofwintercoveredtheirtown,thebrotherssawanopportunity.Theygrabbedtheirshovels(铲子),determinedtoturnthesnowfallintosavingsthroughhardwork.Theystartedintheirownneighborhood.Butmanyresidentshadalreadyclearedtheirwalkways,andthosewhohadn'tonlyofferedafewcoinsforshortpaths.Afterseveraltiringhours,theyhadearnedjustsevendollars—farlessthantheyhoped.Refusingtogiveup,theyheadedtoMapleStreet,wherethehouseswerebiggerandthedrivewaysdeeperinsnow.Noahknockedonthedoor-ofabeautifulVictorianhouse.Mrs.Williamsanswered,lookinglikeshewasinahurry.WhenNoahaskedifsheneededherdrivewayshoveled,sheagreedatonce.Shetookatwenty-dollarbillfromherpurseandplaceditintoNoah'shand."Ihavetorushout,"shesaidwithanencouragingsmile."I'llleaveitinyourcapablehands."Theboysstaredatthebill,amazed.Twentydollars—morethantheyhadmadetheentireday!Laughingindisbelief,theysettoworkwithfreshenergy.Theinitialexcitementcarriedthemthroughthefirsthourofwork.Butastheafternoondarkenedandthetemperaturedropped,theworkbecameharder.Theirhandsgrewnumb(麻木)、theirmusclesached,andthelongdrivewayseemed-endless.Halfwaythrough.Lucasthrewdownhisshovelinfrustration(沮丧).“Let'sjustgo.Shewillneverknowwedidn'tfinish.”注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Noah'sachinghandsseemedtoagreewithhisbrother'swords.____Astheyclearedthefinalshovelofsnow,Mrs.Williams'carreturned.____我写的:Noah'sachinghandsseemedtoagreewithhisbrother'swords.Noahthrewdownhisshoveltoo.Thebrotherssitinthesnow.Theirhandsisredandnumb.ButwhenNoahsawthetwenty-dollarbill,hefeltregret.HesaidtoLucas,"Weshouldnothavebehavedinthatway.Weshouldhonesty."Lucasagreedwithhim.Sotheycontinuedtoworkseriously.Astheyclearedthefinalshovelofsnow,Mrs.Williams'carreturned.Atthesightofthecleaneddriveway,Mrs.Williamfeldsurprised.Andsoonshenoticedthebrothers'plainfacesandredhands.Therefore,sheinvitedthemtocometoherhouse.Onenteringthehouse,awaveofwarmthwashedovertheirhearts.Mrs.Williamsgavetwocupsofcoffeetothemwhichcouldquicklymakethemfeltcomfortable.LucasandNoahthankedhersincerelyandtoldherwhytheyneedthemoney.Uponhearingthewords,Mrs.williamssaidshewasproudofthem.Thenextday,thebrothersboughttheredbicyclesuccessfully.Itwasnotuntilthismomentthattheyfeltthecharmofhonesty.
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67.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Lastsummer,wemovedintoabeautifulhousewheresunlightfloodedthekitcheneverymorning.Theonlydownsidewasthebackyard:behindtall,messybusheslayanoldpond,dryandsmelly."Let'sbringitbacktolife!"Isuggested.Myparentssmiledandagreed.Itbecameourfamily'ssummerproject.Wecleanedoutthemudandlinedtheedgewithprettystones.Atthegardenshop,Ichosecattailsandwaterlilies."Theyfloatlikelittleumbrellas,"Mumsaid."Yes,"Irepliedproudly,andtheykeepthewatercoolandclean."Thencamethebestpart:twotinygoldfish—SpottyandSparkly.Ialsoaskedaboutapondheater.I'dreadthatifthepondfrozesolidinwinter,thefishwouldrunoutofoxygen.Theyneededasmallholeintheicetobreathe,whichaheatercouldkeepopen.Buttheyweresoldout.Asweleft,Inoticedaposterlistingcleverideastopreventicefromsealing(封住)thepond—forexample,keepingthewatermoving,sinceflowingwaterdoesn'tfreezeeasily.Ithoughtwe'dgetaheaterlongbeforewinter,soIdidn'tthinkmuchofthem.Soon,babyfishappeared!Frogsandbutterfliesoftenvisitedtoo.Ourpondfeltlikealivingecosystem.Thenoneevening,theweatherreportwarnedofanearlyfreeze—colderandsoonerthanusual.Mystomachdropped.Westilldidn'thaveaheater!Dadimmediatelyorderedoneonline."It'llarrivebeforetheiceforms,"hepromised.Earlythenextmorning,Iwoketoaworldcoveredinwhite.Ithrewonmycoatandrantothepond.Itwasfrozenwithclearice—noopenwater!YetIcouldstillseethefishmovingslowlybeneath.Irushedbackinside.Dadhadalreadycalledthedeliverycompany,buttheysaiditwouldn'tarrivetodaybecauseoftheicyroads."Thefishcanonlylasthalfadaywithoutfreshair!"Icried."Let'sthinkofsomethingnew,"Mumsaid.注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Sowestartedbrainstormingideastogether.Bynineo'clock,wehadbuiltasimpledevicetokeepaholeopenintheice.我写的:
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