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高三语文作文,辛苦老师批阅。谢谢
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2025-10-03
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高三英语作文2,辛苦老师帮忙批阅,谢谢
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2025-09-21
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高三英语作文1,辛苦老师帮忙批阅。谢谢
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2025-09-21
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高三作文,辛苦老师帮忙批改下。谢谢。辛苦了。
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2025-09-20
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辛苦老师批改。谢谢
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高三语文作文,辛苦帮忙批改,谢谢。
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辛苦老师帮忙批改,高三英语作文。谢谢
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Lastweekend,mylittlesisterfinallycamehome.Weworkandliveinthesamecity,andourparentslivewithme,butsherarelyvisits.Sowhenshewalkedthroughthedoor,everyonewashappy—untilIreallylookedather.Sheseemed…different.Hereyeslookedtired,herfacepale,andshejustseemedinbadmood.Ievennoticedalotofacne(粉刺)hadbrokenoutonherface,whichshealmostneverhad.Ididn'taskaboutitrightaway,figuringsomethingwasbotheringbutnotwantingtospoilthewarm,happyatmosphereweweretryingtomaintain.Afterdinner,shesuddenlytookadeepbreathandsaid,“WhatifIjustquitandbecomeafooddeliverycourier(快递员)?”Ifroze.Mysisterworksatabankasatechnician—astablejobwithgoodpay,thekindmanypeopledreamof.Icouldn'tbelievewhatIwashearing.“Whywouldyoueventhinkthat?”Iasked,completelycaughtoffguard.Shesighedandexplained,“I'mjustsostressedoutlately.Thedeadlines,thecomplicatedprojects,andthepressuretoperformperfectly.It'salltoomuch.IfIdidfooddelivery,atleastI'dbefreetomovearoundandnotstuckinanoffice.”That'swhenithitme—thebreakoutsandtheexhaustioninhereyes.She'dbeencarryingmorepressurethanIrealized.Itoldher,“Nojobiseasy.Ifyou'restressed,hanginthere—itwillpass.Don'tgiveupwhatsomanypeopledreamofhavingjustbecauseofaroughpatch.”Shenoddedsilently,buthershouldersremainedslumped,andIcouldtellmywordshadn'tfullyliftedherburden.Idecidedtogivehersomespacebutalsokeptaneyeonher,wonderinghowIcouldbettersupportherandhelpherthroughthisdifficulttime.注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Mysisterlookedatmewithtearswellingupinhereyes.Afewdayslater,mysistercametomeagain,butthistimewithadifferentlook.我的续写文章:MysisterlookedatmewithtearswellingupinhereyesAtthesightofhersadlook,Ifeltupsettoo,butIhadnoideahowtohelpher.Igentlyaskedmysister,"Itthereanythingtroublingyouatwork?""It'snotjustthework,"shewhispered,hervoicetrembling."EverydayI'mafraidI'llmassupthedata,andtheteammeetingsmakemyheartrace,Ijustcan'tbreathe."Isatdownbesideher,gentlypattingherback."Igetit,"Isaidsoftly."Youdon'thavetobeperfectallthetime.Isuggestyoutalkwithyourmanagerandrequesthimtoreduceyourworkpressure,""Iwillhaveatry.",sheanswered.Havingsaidthat,Iwalkedwithmysisterdownstairstoenjoythescenery,helpingherclearhermindandeasehermood.Ihopedthiswouldcheerherupalittle.Afewdayslater,mysistercametomeagain,butthistimewithadifferentlook.Herfacewasnotlongerpale,andafaintsmileplayedonherlips."Italkedtomymanager,"shesaid,"andsheagreedtoadjustmyworkload.Ialsostartedjoggingafterwork,anditreallyhelpswiththestress."shepaused,thenadded,"Thanksforyounotpushingmeto"toughitout"rightaway.Yourpatienceandadvicemeantmorethanyouknow."Seeingherlightupagain,Ifeltwarmandrelieved——sometimes,thebesthelpisjustbeingtheretolisten.Fromthatdayon,mysistercamehomefrequently,andshewasallsmileseverytimeIsawher.seeingherchange,Ifeltagreatsenseofrelief.Alittlecare,aworldofwarmth.
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高三英语读后续写广西Ineededtodosomethinginmycommunity(社区)inordertocompletethecommunityservicehoursrequiredtograduatefromhighschool.Someofmyfriendshadsigneduptospendtimeatasoupkitchen,soIdid,too.Itseemedlikeagoodthingtodo.Ithoughtthatwewouldjustbepassingoutdinnerstothoseinneed,butIfoundoutwewouldbedoingeverythingfrompreparingtoservingthedinner.Webeganpreparingthefood,frommixingsaladdressingtoseparatingfrozenmeat.Muchstillneededtobedonebeforedinnerwasserved,butalreadyoutsidethebuildingmanyhomelesspeopleweregathering.Itwasn'tuntilacoupleofhourslaterthatweopenedthedoorsandbeganservingdinner.Asthelineofpeoplecametowardme,Igotalittlescared.I'dcomefacetofacewiththehomeless:HowshouldIact?Howwouldtheytreatme?Wouldtheyhatemeforhavingmorethantheydid?Whilesomeofthepeoplelookedveryfriendly,someofthemlookedsodangerous.Ididn'thavetoomuchtimetoworryaboutit.Iwasassigned(分配)toservethesaladwiththeladynexttome.ShesmiledatmeandsaidifIneededhelp,she'dberightthere,whichIfoundquitecomforting.Ihadneverseensomanypeoplewantingfood.Theywereofallagesandnationalities.Mostofthemworeclothesthatweretornanddirty.Somelookedliketheyhadtotallygivenuponlife,whileothersseemedtobemakingthebestofthesituation,smilingandjoking.Somewerebetteroffthanothers,buttheyallneededagoodmealandawarmplacetoeat.Itsaddenedmetothinkofhowmanypeopletherewerewhodidn'thaveaplacetocallhomeandtheonlyfoodtheygotcamefromasoupkitchen.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。66.Astheycameinmydirection,Iputonmybrightestandhappiestsmile.IwassohappythatIhadearnedmyservicehoursinthisway.我的续写文章:Astheycomeinmydirection,Iputonmybrightestandhappiestsmile.Movedbythefactthattheyoftensufferfromhungerandcold,Iamdeterminedtohelpthemwithallmyheart.IgreetedeachpersonwarmlyasIhandedthemabowlofsalad,makingsuretolookthemintheeye.AnelderlymanWithworeclothes,thankedmesoftlyandsaid,“thissaladtasteslikehome.”Hiswordsmademyheartfeelfull,andIsmileevenwider,tellinghimIwasgladhelikeit.Havinghandedoutthedinnerquickly,Isatdownbesidetotakearest.Watchingthemenjoytheirmealjoyfully,Ifeltsorryforbeingafraidofthematfirstday.IwassohappythatIhadearnedmyservicehoursinthisway.Ifeltluckytohavehadachancetoseethepossibilitywithinmethathadmotivatedmetoact.Ihadthoughtthiswasjustatasktograduate,butitturnedouttobealessoninkindnessandgratitude.Thesepeopledidn'tjustneedfood——theyneedtofeelseenandcaredfor,andIwasgladIcouldbepartofthat.Fromthatdayon,Idecidedtovolunteeratthesoupkitchenmoreoften,notjustforhours
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假定你是李华,你的英国朋友John面临选择大学专业的难题,来信问你询问是跟随兴趣还是职业发展前景,请你给他回一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.表示理解,2.表达你的看法并解释原因,注意,1.写作词数应为80个左右,2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。我的作文:Dear John,Knowing that you have trouble in choosing a university major which is suitable for you, I understand your variety, It is common for us to make a choice with confusion.In my opinion, I think that we should follow our interests to choose a university major. These are my reasons: First of all, you will be full of energy when you study it if you are interested in your major. Besides, Although the major which you choose may be not suit the current career prospects, it often leads to greater long-term achievements.Hope my suggestions can help you make a wise choice. I expect you to make a choice that satisfies you.
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