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英语作文批改润色半年+语文作文批改润色半年
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67.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Theairportannouncementinformedpassengersthatduetobadweather,theflightwouldbedelayedfortwohoursbeforeboarding.Mary'smomcommentedquietlythatthedelayseemedtohaveruinedeveryone'smood.Buteleven-year-oldMarystayedcalm,softlyhumming(I)anewsongshehadjustlearned.Shewaslookingforwardtotheweekendtriptovisithergrandparents,excitedtosharethesongwiththem.Toher,musicwaslikeaninvisiblestringthatcouldtiestrangerstogether,creatingawarmcommunity.Sherememberedthefirsttimeshehadfeltthisconnection:atsixyearsold,waitingforthebuswithhermomonahot,boringday.Thenacheerfultunecamefromastoreloudspeaker—asongaboutagiriandherdreams:gnisowbren"Dreamsofsunshineandfieldsofgold,Wheretheheartisneverold,Singingsongsthatneverend,Inaworldthat'smybestfriend..."Withoutthinking,Marysangalong-hervoicesoftandgentleatfirst,likeawhispercarriedonthegentlewind,whichgraduallygrowingstrongerandmoreconfident.Themelodywassimpleyetengaging.Timepassedwithouthernoticing.Whenthebusarrived,passengerssmiled;anoldmanbeathiswalkingsticktothebeat.Asthedoorsclosed,everyonewashumming.Momwhisperedtoher,"Youjustliftedallourspirits."Nothingseemedbetterthanmusicforcaimingarestlessheart,andMaryrememberedthat.Afterboardingtheplane,thepassengersweretoldofanotherweatherdelay—atleastanother45minutes.Thecabin(t/fE)grewtensewithrestlessmovementsandcomplaints.Thenasuddencrycutthroughtheair.Acrosstheaisle(iffi)toMary'sleft,atinygirl,barelythreeyearsold,begantocry.Hermothertriedeverything—rockingher,offeringsnacks,water,toys-butnothingworked.Thechild'sfacewaswetwithtears,hercriesloudandbroken.Passengersshifteduncomfortablyintheirseatsasthecryingfilledthecabin.注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Maryhesitatedforamoment,andthenturnedtohermomParagraph2:Slowly,thebaby'scriessoftened.
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47.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。ItwasaregularSaturdaymorning,justlikeanyother.Twasdrivingmynine-year-olddaughter,Emma,toherweeklyswimminglesson.Recently,Emmahadstartedseeingmeasatrueherowhocouldsolveanyproblemfairly."Youalwaysknowwhat'sright,Dad,"shewouldsay.WeweretalkingaboutherclasswhenInoticedacrowdupaheadandhadtoslowdown.Peopleweregatheredonthestreet,pointingandlaughing.Inthemiddleofitallwasalargebrownandwhitecow.Itlookedcompletelylostandterrified.Somekidswereshoutingnearby,whichseemedtoscaretheanimalevenmore.Astrongfeelingofangerroseinsideme.Thesepeopleweretreatingthepoorcreature'sfearasentertainment."Dad,thatcowisscared."Emmasaidsoftlyfromthebackseat."Whatwouldyoudo?"Herquestionwasserious.ShebelievedIwoulddotherightthing."Well,"Isaid,tryingtosoundconfidentforher,"Iwouldcalmitdownandhelpitfinditswayhome."IexplainedthatIknewalotaboutcows.Ispentmychildhoodonafarm,andnowIevenworkedatabeefprocessingplant.IwassuremyexperiencewouldimpressEmma.AfterdroppingoffaveryimpressedEmma,Iturnedmycararound.Ifeltitwasmydutytogobackandhelp.WhenIreturned,thescenewasworse.Ilearnedfromashopownerthatthecowhadbeenwanderingforawhile,knockingoverafruitstandandcausingquiteabitoftrouble.Itookaslow,carefulsteptowardstheanimal,speakinginagentievoice.However,insteadofcalmingdown,thecowlowereditsheadandletoutathreateningsound.Itstareddirectlyatme,fullofhostility.Myconfidencefaded,replacedbyasuddenfear.Thiswasn'tgoingtobeeasyatall.注意1:续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。JustasIwasabouttoturnandrun,twopoliceofficersarrivedonthescene.Afterwemanagedtosecurethecowtoatree,webegantodiscusswhattodowithit.
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