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英语作文批改润色半年+语文作文批改润色半年
创建于:2024-08-31 00:34:50
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iwasavictimofsocialanxietydisorder,soI'mnottalkative,nottomentionmakingfriendswithothers.Butaftervisitingacatrescueandadoptioncenter,itseemedthatIwassavedbythecutepetsandthelovebetweenhumansandanimals.Gradually,Ifoundmysymptomsofsocialanxietydisorderlessened.Andlater,atthisrescueandadoptioncenter,Imadetheacquaintanceofmyfriend,Sally,whowasaregularatthecenter:Shealwaystookastraycathomeorhelpedthesestraycatstobeadopted.Aboutafewweeksago,SallypostedapictureonherTwitter,whichwasaphotoofaheavily-injuredcatnearherhomeontheeasternoutskirtsofOakland.Iwasshockedandheartbrokenwhenshetoldmetheterriblesituationaboutthecat—ithadlostlargepatchesofskinandtheboneswerealmostexposed.Shesaidshehadtakenthecattoanearbyclinic,andweallbelievedthatthedoctorscouldsavethislittlepoorthing.Butthinkingaboutitsseriousinjury,Ifearedtheworst.Meanwhile,Sallysentmeaninvitationtoachatgroup,inwhichIgottoknowotherfriendsofmine.Theywerefromdifferentwalksoflife,buthadthesamelovingheart.Weweregatheredforthecause.Withmorepeoplejoiningourchatgroup,wenownumbered10—allbroughttogetherbyLove,thenamethatSallygavethecat.AndthedoctorattheclinicwouldsharetheconditionofLovewithusinthechatgroup.注意:1.续写词数应力150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Oneday,weweresuddenlyinformedthatLove'sconditionhadworsened.WeimmediatelybroughtLovetoabighospital.高三辽宁省名校联盟三月联考英语读后续写满分25分,学校只给了九分,除了字体书写外给我分析一下,在内容上有哪些欠缺和不足之处
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