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第二节读后续写（大作文题干）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Theoldwoodenboatsatinthegarage,coveredinathicklayerofdust.ForGrandpaJoe,itwasatreasurechestofmemories.ForhisteenagegrandsonLeo,itwasjustapileofjunktakingupspace.Everysummer,Leocametostaywithhisgrandparentsbythelake,andeveryyear,Grandpawouldsuggestfixinguptheboat.Everyyear,Leowouldfindanexcuse.“Thisyear,Leo,”Grandpasaid,hiseyestwinklingdespitehisage,“wearegoingtogetherbackinthewater.Shehasonelastadventureinher.”Leosighed,scrollingthroughhisphone.“Grandpa,it’salotofwork.Thewoodisprobablyrotten.Besides,whohasthetime?”ButGrandpawasalreadypullingtarps（防水布）offandgatheringtools.“Nonsense.Wehaveallsummer.Handmethatsander（砂光机）.”Reluctantly,Leoputhisphonedownandgrabbedthesander.Asheworked,Grandpatoldstories.HetoldLeoaboutthesummerhebuilttheboatwithhisownfather.Hetoldhimaboutenormousfishhecaughtthatgotaway,astorythatgrewmoredramaticwitheachtelling.HetoldhimabouttakingGrandmaontheirfirstdateacrossthelaketowatchthefireworks.Witheverystory,Leobegantoseetheboatdifferently.Thescratchesonthewoodweren’tdefects;theywereatimelineofalifefullylived.Daysturnedintoweeks.Theyreplacedrottenplanks,appliedfreshpaint,andpolishedtheoldcomponents.Leolearnedtoidentifydifferenttools,tofeelthesatisfactionofmakingsomethingsmoothwithsandpaper,andtoappreciatethequietcompanyofhisgrandfather.HenoticedhowGrandpa’shands,thoughwrinkledandshaky,movedwithpracticedeaseoverthewood,asiftheyrememberedeverycurve.Finally,thedaycame.Withtheirjointefforts,theypushedthenewlypaintedboat,nowacheerfulskyblue,downtheslopeandintothesparklingwater.Itfloatedperfectlyandgentlyasifeagertobefree.Theyclimbedin,Grandpatakingtheoars（船桨）.Theyrowedoutontothecalmlake,theonlysoundsbeingthegentledipoftheoarsandthebirdssinging.Inthemiddleofthelake,Grandpastoppedrowingandlettheboatdrift.Hereachedintohispocketandpulledoutasmall,worn-outnotebook.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“Thisisthelogbookfromourfirsttrip,”Grandpasaidsoftly,handingittoLeo.Asthesunbegantoset,paintingtheskyinshadesoforangeandpink,Leolookedathisgrandpa.
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高中英语语文作文半年
阅读下面的材料，根据要求写作。（60分）2025年12月31日，庞众望入选清华大学2025年学生年度人物。他父亲罹患精神分裂症，母亲下肢残疾，他从小扛起家重胆，在逆境中前行，“跌倒、爬起来，再跌倒、再爬起来”，考上名校，攻读博士。他说：“韧性是从小家庭带给我的底色。”韧性生长，让庞众望在不那么顺遂的人生路上实现了一次又一次超越。遭遇逆境，是我们新时代青年成长过程中不可避免的常态以上材料引起你怎样的联想与思考？请写一篇文章。要求：选准角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题；不要套作，不得抄袭；不得泄露个人信息；不少于800字。
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高中英语语文作文半年
第二节读后续写（大作文题干）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Theoldwoodenboatsatinthegarage,coveredinathicklayerofdust.ForGrandpaJoe,itwasatreasurechestofmemories.ForhisteenagegrandsonLeo,itwasjustapileofjunktakingupspace.Everysummer,Leocametostaywithhisgrandparentsbythelake,andeveryyear,Grandpawouldsuggestfixinguptheboat.Everyyear,Leowouldfindanexcuse.“Thisyear,Leo,”Grandpasaid,hiseyestwinklingdespitehisage,“wearegoingtogetherbackinthewater.Shehasonelastadventureinher.”Leosighed,scrollingthroughhisphone.“Grandpa,it’salotofwork.Thewoodisprobablyrotten.Besides,whohasthetime?”ButGrandpawasalreadypullingtarps（防水布）offandgatheringtools.“Nonsense.Wehaveallsummer.Handmethatsander（砂光机）.”Reluctantly,Leoputhisphonedownandgrabbedthesander.Asheworked,Grandpatoldstories.HetoldLeoaboutthesummerhebuilttheboatwithhisownfather.Hetoldhimaboutenormousfishhecaughtthatgotaway,astorythatgrewmoredramaticwitheachtelling.HetoldhimabouttakingGrandmaontheirfirstdateacrossthelaketowatchthefireworks.Witheverystory,Leobegantoseetheboatdifferently.Thescratchesonthewoodweren’tdefects;theywereatimelineofalifefullylived.Daysturnedintoweeks.Theyreplacedrottenplanks,appliedfreshpaint,andpolishedtheoldcomponents.Leolearnedtoidentifydifferenttools,tofeelthesatisfactionofmakingsomethingsmoothwithsandpaper,andtoappreciatethequietcompanyofhisgrandfather.HenoticedhowGrandpa’shands,thoughwrinkledandshaky,movedwithpracticedeaseoverthewood,asiftheyrememberedeverycurve.Finally,thedaycame.Withtheirjointefforts,theypushedthenewlypaintedboat,nowacheerfulskyblue,downtheslopeandintothesparklingwater.Itfloatedperfectlyandgentlyasifeagertobefree.Theyclimbedin,Grandpatakingtheoars（船桨）.Theyrowedoutontothecalmlake,theonlysoundsbeingthegentledipoftheoarsandthebirdssinging.Inthemiddleofthelake,Grandpastoppedrowingandlettheboatdrift.Hereachedintohispocketandpulledoutasmall,worn-outnotebook.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“Thisisthelogbookfromourfirsttrip,”Grandpasaidsoftly,handingittoLeo.Asthesunbegantoset,paintingtheskyinshadesoforangeandpink,Leolookedathisgrandpa.
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