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逐词逐句批改错误分析，不规范不地道不符合语境表达改进，写作指导，全文润色，严格打分
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英语作文批改润色半年
DearSirorMadam,Asacustomerwhohaspurchasedanelectronicdictionaryfromyourstore.Ifeelquietdisappointedwiththequalityofthedictionary.Thepurposeofwritingthisletteristomakeacomplaint.Firstandforemost,thereissomethingwrongwiththescreenofthedictionary,whichprevented.mefrompreparingwellfortheupcomingexam.Morever,Iamdissatisfiedwithyourafter-saleservice.Itwasyouwhopromised24-houronlinesupport,however,nooneansweredwhenIcalledtwice.Therefore,youaresupposedtoprovidemewithanewoneorrefundmymoney.Ikindlyrequestyouhandleitassoonaspossible.Yourssincerely,LiMing
峻俊仔
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英语作文批改润色半年
DearProfessor,IhopethisemailfindsyouwellI'mLiMing,oneofyourfuturestudentsinChina.ThemainpurposeofthisemailistorecommendsometouristattractionsinmycityFirstly,youmustseeistheGratewall.Whenyoustandonthetopofit,youwillbestunningbythespecularview.Anotherplaceyoucan'tmissistheForbiddenCity,whereyoucanreviewthehistoryoftheMingandQingdynasties.I'msurethatitwillmakeyoulearnmoreaboutChinese.Besides,thereareuniqueHutongs.Ridingabikealongthestreetafterawhole-dayworkingisanrelaxingwaytoexperienceBeijing'sculture.I'msureyouwillloveBeijing.Ifyouhaveanyotherquestions,pleaseaskme.Yours,LiMing
峻俊仔
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英语作文批改润色半年
Thisisacolumnchart,whichclearlyillustillustratesthecollegestudents'plansaftergraduatingin2018and2013.Thenumberofstudentschoosingemploymentdecreasedfrom68.1%in2013to60.7%in2018.Meanwhile,theproportionofstudentschoosingtopursuefurthereducationhasincreasedfrom26.3%in2013to34%in2018.Andmoreandmorestudentssetuptheirownbussiness.Thephenomenoncanbeattributedtothefollowingreasons.Firstofall,withtheincreasingnumberofcollegegraduates,thecompetitioninthejobmarketisbecomingfierce.Thussomestudentsdon'tchoosetogotoworkdirectlyaftergraduation.Furthermore,somepositions'recruitmentrequirementshavebecomehigher,whichforcesstudentstopursuefurthereducationinordertomeettherequirements.Lastbutnotleast,therearebetterppolicyconditionstoencourageeveryonetosetuptheirownbusiness,Allinall,nowdaysstudentshavemoreideasandplans.Theircareerplansaftergraduationalsohavebecomemorediverse.
峻俊仔
2024-10-07 2 评论 1 喜欢
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