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DearAlan,Howisitgoing？OurschoolwillholdaMusicFestivalinordertocultivatethesenseofmusic.Themusicfestivalwillbeon10a.m.nextsundayanditwilltakeplaceontheschoolsportsfield.Duringthistime,wecansellticketstostudents.What'smore,wecanworkatfoodstandstosellfoodanddrinks.Lastbutnotleast,wecangiveaperformancetostudents.wecanplaytheviolin,piano.,singsongsanddancetomusic.Allinall,Isincerelyhopethatyoucanjoinusandhaveameaningfultimehere.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming
yiyi
2024-08-10 0 评论 1 喜欢
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ThetablebelowshowsAustralia’spost-schoolqualificationsandthedifferentpercentofgenderofthem.Itisclearthatmoremaleshaveahigherqualificationthanfemale.However,femalestakeupmorepercentofundergraduatediplomaandbachelor’sdegree.Aswecansee,thepeoplewhohaveaskilledvocationaldiplomaaremen,whichis,around90percent.But,only40percentoftheoneswhohaveanundergraduatediplomaaremale,60percentofthemarefemale.Malesandfemalesbothalmosttakeuphalfofthepeoplewhohaveabachelor’sdegree.About60percentofthepeoplewhogainedapostgraduatediplomaaremale,andtheother40percentarefemale.Thedateisquitesimilaronthepercentageofthedifferentgenderswhohaveamaster’sdegree.About60percentmaleand40percentfemale.Ofallthecomparisons,onlytwohaveahigherpercentageoffemalesratherthanmales.
neko
2024-07-09 3 评论 1 喜欢
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Inmyopinion,governmentsshouldgivecreativeartistsreasonablerestrictionsinordertohelpthemexpressthemselvescorrectly.Sometimes,givingartiststoomuchfreedomisabadthingforcreatingagoodsocialenvironment.Somecreationsmightbefilledwithtoomuchviolenceandunhealthythoughts.Thismightleadtobadresults.Forinstance,youngchildrendon’thaveagoodcontrolovertheirbehaviors,andtheyhaven’tbuiltuptheirvalue,soit’seasyforthemtobeinfluenced.Thiscanbebadforthefutureofkids,thesociety,andevenhumanbeings.Someworksmightspreadthoughtsagainstthegovernment,whichcanalsobringhugeharmtothestablesociety.However,tomuchrestrictioncanbeadisasterforthoughts.Forexample,intheancienttimesofChina,emperorsusedtouseallkindsofmethodstocontrolthethoughtsoftheircitizens.Thiscausedtheossificationofthoughtsandtheweakenofwisdom.Thissloweddowntheprocessofdevelopmentandendedinlosingtheseveralwarsagainstinvaders.Anotherexample,istheSpringandAutumnperiodofChinesehistory.Thiswasaperiodwhenthekingsfoughteachotherfrequently.Everymanofinsightmadetheirownattemptstofitintothisenvironment.Countlessideologistsappeared,andgreatlyinfluencedlatergenerations.SuchasConfuciusandMengzi.Allinall,Ithinkitisnecessaryforgovernmentstogivecreativeartistsreasonablerestrictionsthatwouldn’tblocktheirthoughts,andleadthemtoexpressthemselvesinabetterwayatthesametime.
neko
2024-07-08 3 评论 1 喜欢
初中英语作文季卡
Withtheaimofstrengtheningourstudentsbodies,ourschoolhelda5miles’cross-countryrunningracelastSunday.Therunstartedattheschoolgatesandendedatthefeetofthesouthmountain.Thisroutisnotonlysimple,butcanalsohelpstudentsgetclosertonature.Itwasasunnyday,brightlightshonethroughtheleavesoftreesandtwinkledonourbodies.Theskywasblueandclear,asoftbreezeblewaroundusgently.Everyonetherewasfilledwithjoy.Oncetherunnersreachedthefinishline,everyonecheeredwholeheartedly.Theactivitywasabigsuccess.Wegotthechancetorelaxandbecomehealthieratthesametime.
neko
2024-07-04 3 评论 1 喜欢
初中英语作文季卡
ThefirstgraphshowhowmuchelectricityisneededinwinterandsummerinEngland.ThesecondgraphshowshoeaverageEnglishhomesuseselectricity.It’sclearthatmoreelectricityisneededinwinterthaninsummerinEngland.Mostoftheelectricityneededisusedonheatingroomsandwater.Aswecansee,theunitsofelectricitywavebetween10,000and20,000insummer,30,000and50,000duringwinter.Themostamountofelectricityisusedduringthelatenight,around21p.m.to24p.m..Between6a.m.and9a.m.,theleastamountofelectricityisneeded.Insummer,thereisanotherhighpeakataround3o’clock.Inwinter,thelineissmoothingeneral.Overhalfoftheelectricityisusedforheating.Lighting,TV,radioandvacuumcleaners,foodmixerstakeup15percenteach.Ovens,kettles,washingmachinesmakeuptherestofthepiechart.
neko
2024-07-03 4 评论 1 喜欢
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