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创建于：2024-05-31 10:05:11
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Inmyopinion,experiencesinourliveshavemuchmoreinfluenceonourpersonalityanddevelopment,buttalentisalsoimportant.Asthesayinggoes“practicemakesperfect”.Justtalentisfarfromenough,wemustpracticeagainandagainbeforewecanreachthestandardofperfect.Forinstance,athletesneedtopracticeforyearsbeforetheycanattendraces.Astudentinourclassjoinedtheschoolrolerskatingteam.Hehadtalent,butitstilltookhimallhisresttimetopracticebeforehecouldjoinanysortsofraces.AnotherstoryisaboutthefamousartistDaVinci.Asweallknow,histeachermadehimdraweggsoverandoveragain.Bydoingso,DaVinci’sdrawingtecnecsgradually,andfinallybecameagreatartistwhowaswidelyknownbyeveryone.Theseexamplestellsusthatexperienceismoreimportantthanthecharacteristicswearebornwith.However,thecharacteristicswearebornwitharealsoimportant.Withouttalentitwillbereallyhardforustosucceed.Thisiswhyweneedtogiveupwhennecessaryandputourtalenttogooduse.OnceIlearnediceskating,Ipracticedforalongtimebutstillcouldn’tgetthemainpointofthegesturesIlearned.But,anotherstudentinmyclasscouldpreformperfectlywithoutalotofpracticeasifshewasborntoskate.Asyoucansee,talentisimportant,too.Allinall,Ithinkexperiencesinourliveshavemoreinfluenceonourpersonalityanddevelopment.Meanwhile,weshouldn’tignoretheimportanceofthecharacteristicswearebornwith.
neko
2024-07-02 3 评论 1 喜欢
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Richard’sdogshadbeenplayinginthefieldandeventuallycameuptohim.HeranaroundRichardincircles,barkedandgentlytouchedhimwithhisnose,lookingconfused.Justthen,heseemedtonoticethathismaster’sleftlegwasinaweirdangle.Withonehandsupportinghisbody,Richardmanagedtopathisdog’shead,”Wouldyoumindhelpingmeabit?”ToRichard’ssurprise,hisdogstartedtryinghisbesttodraghimtotheroad.Withcontinueseffort,theymanagedtomovetotheroad.CatchingsightofacarRichardwaved,butitjustdrovepast.Thenasecondpassedbyandathird...Thedaywasgettingdarkerandcolder,Richardfeltdesperate,withlittlehopeleft.However,gleamsofdaylightremained-Richardsawtheseventhcar.Hewavedagain,thistimethecarstopped,theownercameoffandaskedifRichardneededhelp.Richardnearlybustintotearswiththepurejoyofbeingsaved.Hehuggedhisdogtightly,thankingboththedriverandhisdog.Lightfromthesettingsunshoneonthemmakingthismomentwarmandtouching.
neko
2024-06-27 3 评论 1 喜欢
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Ali’sheartsank,hehadtowinthirdplaceforhissister.Ihavetokeeprunning,thisisn’ttheendyet,hethoughttohimself.Alistoodupasfastashecouldandchasedaftertheboywhocrashedintohim.Alispedupwiththedeterminationoftakingthirdplace,ignoringthegreatpaininhisankle.Theraisewaswasalmostcompleted,Aliandhiscompetitorwasshoulderbyshoulder.Finally,theypassedthefinishline.UnfortunatelyforAli,hedidn’tbeathisapponent.Thoughfeelingmiserable,hestillcongratulatedtheboy.AsAliwasjustabouttogohome,thinkingwhathecouldsaytohissister,theboystoppedhim.“I’msosorryforknockingintoyou,”hesaidhonestly,”youaretheonewhowassupposedtowinthirdplace,notme.pleasetaketheseshoes.youdeservetheprize.”Filledwithpleasure,Aliwalkedhomequickly.HethoughtabouthistalkwithSam-theboywhocollidedwithhim,now,hisnewfriend.Theyfoundoutthattheywherestudyinginthesameschool,theyhadsimilarhobbiesand,moreimportantly,warmandcaringhearts.Aliworeahugesmileonhisfacefeelingasifhewasdippedintoapoolofwarmwater.ThedimlightfromthesungentlywrappedAliandhissisterinahugasAlitoldhissisterabouthissplendidday,leavingbothkidswithasenseofprideandpurejoy.
neko
2024-06-26 4 评论 1 喜欢
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