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逐词逐句精细批改，不规范表达改进，详细分数分析，500字以上写作指导，全文改进
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原文Itseemsthatfriendshipcanalsoexistbetweendogsandhorses.I’vewitnessedoneinspiringcase.Onemorning,IwentoutsidetofeedourhorseBullet.Usually,Bulletwaitseagerlyatthefenceforhisbreakfast.Butthismorninghestayednearatreeinthepasture’scenter.Ashebeganjoyfullywalkingtowardme,Inoticedadoglyinginthetallgrassbeneaththetree.SothiswaswhatheldBullet’sattentionthismorning:ahomelessdog.MostofthehomelessdogsshiedawayfromourlargeBullet,butthisoneseemedtofeelsafeintheshelterofthetallgrassregardlessofBullet.Iplacedalfalfacubesinsidethefence.AfterBulletatethem,I’dgivehimsomecookieshelovedmost.Iwalkedbacktomyporchandsatdown.AsBulletatealfalfa,thedogstoodupcautiously,staredatBulletforlongandthenslowlywalkedtowardBullet.ThedogoftenpausedandlookedatmetoensureIwasn’tathreat.AsthedogdrewclosertoBullet,Iheldmybreath.Ididn’tknowhowBulletwouldreacttoananimalthatapproachedwhilehewaseating.Knowingahorse’skickcankilladog,Idecidedtoscarethedogaway.JustthenBulletswunghisheadandlookedatthedog.Notmindingit,heatehisfoodagain.Thedogdrewcloseenoughtotakeanalfalfacube.MyheartbrokeasIwatchedthedog—afemale—chewingonthealfalfa.Shehadtobeextremelyhungrytoattempttoeathorsefeed.Iwentinsidethehouse,carriedsomemeatandwalkedtowardthefence.Thedogsoonrantothesafetyofthetallgrassnearthetree.Iputthemeatdownoutsidethefenceandwentbackinsidethehouse.She’dprobablycomeforthemeatwhenIwasoutofsight.Minuteslater,IrealizedIhadn’tyetgivenBullethiscookies.Itooksomeandwentbackoutside.Amazingly,Bulletwaslyingdowninthegrassbeneaththetreewiththedognexttohim.Ismiledatthewarmscenetheycreated.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.KnowingIcarriedhistreat,Bulletgotupquicklyandrantome.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ButBulletdidn’tcareasthedogjumpedforwardandtookacookie.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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