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高中英语作文精批半年
Withthreelittlebabies,Inevertookabreak,completelyignoringanyself-care.WhenIwastootiredtomakemyselfdinner,I'djusteatthekids'leftovercereal(麦片粥).Ithoughtthiswasagreatplantolosesomeweightandcalleditthe"CerealforDiet."Backthen,Iknewnothingaboutnutrition.Ofcourse,theCerealforDietfailed,asdidallmyotherattempts.Oneday,aftercleaningupallthemessmykidshadmade,Iwentoutforawalk.Ipassedagym.Ilookedaway.Healthypeoplewentthere,butthiswasnotme.Whileturningaway,Isawanadforasix-monthfitnesschallenge.Icontinuedmyfastwalkintheoppositedirection,butthatsignjuststayedonmymind.Istillrememberwhatfinallymotivatedmetosignupforthechallenge.Itwasaten-minuteperiodinwhichmysonthrewhisspaghettiplatestraightup,sendingnoodlesandsauceflyingeverywhere.Assoonasmyhusbandgothome,Isaid,"You'reincharge."Imadeabeelineforthegym,marchedstraightinandsaid,"Fixme."AndIwasassignedayoungandfittrainer,Emily.Sheaskedwhatmygoalswereforthesix-monthchallenge.Atthatmoment,Iwasspeechless.Noticingmyembarrassment,EmilyjusthandedmetheheaviestweightsIhadinmylifeandsaid,"Okay,soinsixmonthsyouwillcompeteinabody-buildingshow."Itriedexplaining,"No,Idon'twanttodoashow.Thatsoundsscary."Sheignoredmyfear,andwejumpedintostrictworkoutsandnutritionplanning.Overthenextsixmonths,Emilyforcedmetofocusonmyself—mywantsandmyneeds.Ilearnedtoseefoodasstrengthandsweatasprogress.Ilearnedhowtofuelmybodyinsteadofstarvingit,balancingproteins,carbs,andfats.Emilypushedmepastmylimits,correctingmyform,timingmybreaks,andcheeringmeonwhenIwantedtoquit.Iimprovedeverydayinthegym.(1)续写词数应为150左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Oneday,Emilyhandedmeanapplicationform.Paragraph2:SoonIjumpedintoweeksofpreparation.Oneday,Emilyhandedmeanapplicationform.Istaredattheform,withastrongsenseofhelplessandanxietyfloodingoverme.Irecalledthepasttimeofme—amessy,fat,ordinarywoman,andthecriticalwordslike"ugly"sobelieve.Justatthatnegativemoment,Emilybrokeoutmythoughtsandclaimed,"You'vealreadychangedfromafamily'mother'toa'PowerfulLady',whyimmersingyourselfinthepastratherthanbeginninganewchapter?"StartingClosingmyeyes,strokingmybody,IchattedwithmyselftofindIdecidedtocompeteintheform.SinceI'vecaughtsightofmyhard-workingpractice,Emily'ssincereapproval,andmydesiretobeabetterme.SoonIjumpedintoweeksofpreparation.AsIcaughtthecerealagain,Ipreparedgarbages,fruitsandyogurttogether.Thistimethe"Cerealfordiet"isbothenergeticandbeneficial,forthereasonthattheskillofbalancingproteins,carbsandfatswereempoweredbyme.Inthegym,running,swimminganddocumenting,
Kylie
2025-12-03 1 评论 0 喜欢
高中英语作文精批半年
第一节(满分15分)近日,一些学校开始尝试使用AI辅助心理咨询。你校英文报就此现象开展征文活动,请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:(1)你的观点;(2)你的理由。注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。MyViewsonAI-DrivenMentalHealthSupportonCampusMyViewsonAI-DrivenMentalHealthSupportonCampusKnowingthatAI-DrivenMentalHealthSupportonCampusarebeingappliedoncampus,I'mwritingtoexpressmyapprovalofit.Firstandforemost,I'mconvincedthiscreativecooperationwouldbecompletelybeneficial.WhileAIprovidesangleslikemotivationandtheoriesbehindstudents'challenges,theteachercouldexplainitinabetter-understandingwaybyshowinginspiringexpressionsandprovidingrelevantexamples.Furthermore,apartfrompsychologicalconsulta-tions,sharingstories,aseriesofperformancewithdelightfulmusicthroughAIwouldbepresented.Notonlycanthispatternstrengthenstudents'mentalinsightsbutalsogrowinginabothinterestingandeducationalatmosphere.Thanksforyourconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua.
Kylie
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高中英语作文精批半年
Lastmonth,myfriendOllieandIdiscoveredaposterintheparkannouncingarecycled-sculpturecontestcalled“TrashtoTreasureDay”.Thegrandprizewasagiftcertificatetoaskateshop—anexcitingprospectforbothofus,sincewewereinneedofnewskateboards.Theposterstatedthatallmaterialswouldbeprovidedon-site,sowedecidedtoteamup.微信公众号IAIEnglishWebrainstormedideasbeforehand.Olliesuggestedarobot,whileIthoughtofatree,butwecouldn’tdeciderightaway.Thatnight,Ilayawaketryingtothinkoftheperfectsculptureidea.WhenIfinallydozedoff,Ihadawilddream.OllieandIwereworkingonasculptureofafire-breathingdragon.Itwassofantastic,weendedupwinningfirstplace.Butjustasthejudgewashandingustheprize,ourdragoncametolifeandswallowedusup!Afterbreakfast,whenItoldOllieaboutthedream,hewascrazyabouttheideaofadragon.ThoughIfeltabituneasyaboutthepartwhereitgobbleusup,Iagreedandspenttherestofthedayresearching.Oncontestday,Ibroughtaperfectdragonpictureasourguide.Theareawasfilledwithrecycledmaterials—cardboard,containers,lids,usedtoys,andtrinkets(小配件)—whileeachworkstationsuppliedscissors,glue,andmarkers.Awomaninahatwelcomedeveryone,encouragingustoworkaloneortogether,withjudgingandcakeatthreeo’clock.OllieandIfoundaspotbutgotofftoaveryslowstart.Wedisagreedonwhichboxestouse,struggledtoattachparts,andcouldn’tmakeoursculpturelookanythinglikemypicture.Afteraverylongtimeofpiecingandpatching,oursculpturestartedtolookthetiniestbitlikeadragon.Tomakeourdragonmorelifelike,werackedourbrains.Ollienotedthatbuttonedlidsmadegoodeyes,butwestillneededamouth.ThenIrememberedabigredzipperonaroundtable—itwasjustright!Ihurriedbacktograbit.(1)续写词数应为150左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:ButjustasIreachedforthezipper,anotherhandappearedandpickeditup.Paragraph2:IwasprettysureOlliewouldn’tmindanewpartner,andluckilyIwasright.ButjustasIreachedforthezipper,anotherhandappearedandpickeditup.Unfortunately,justatthemomentItriedtoexpressthenecessityofthezipper,themanstaredatmeincalm,saying"Thefirstgotitthefirstgainit"andpassedaway.Afterhesitation,Ichosethecardboardintheleftasalternative.ButasIreturnedtoOllieandpresentedmyobtaining,hesighedandcomplainedthatoursculpturewasnotonlyundelicatebutalsotooslowtoassembleit.SoInegativeamthatIpouredoutmyemotiononOllie,askinghimtochangethepartner.IwasprettysureOlliewouldn'tmindanewpartner,andluckilyIwasright.Hedidn'tsayanythingbutrushedtowardsthenextcorner.Tomysurprise,heturnedparthisfavouritebasketballtrinketstochangethezipper.Astrongsenseofwarmthandenthusiasmoverwhelmingmeashe
Kylie
2025-11-27 2 评论 0 喜欢
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