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"That'sagreatidea,Ava,"Samexclaimedexcitedly.Max'sfacealsolitupwithagrin,hiseyessparkledwithpassion.Withouthesitation,theybegantodiscusshowtoarrangetheworks.Assoonaseverthingpreparedwell,thesezealouskidstarttheirworkeagerly.MaxandAvacollectedthecandywrappersandchipbags.Sampickeduptheplasticbottle.Numerousasthetrashwas,theyworkedwithenthusiasm.Thesightofthepark-goersactionmadetheteamdelighted.Withthepark-goers'assist,theteamworkedmoreexcitedly.Afterwhatseemedtobeages,theyweregreetedbyanewtidyscenery."Wemadeit",samyelled,jumpingupanddownwithexcitement.MaxandAvaalsosmiledtoAam.Standingbesidethecleanedroad,theygazedatthetidyplayground,feelingaprofoundpeacesettledownwithinthem.Notuntilthendidtheyrealizethatalittlebitmoreenffortsandalittlebitmorecarenesswillcreateabetterenvironment.
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