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Robinsaid,"Weneedtolookforsomestickstokeepthefireon."Luckily,thesituationwasn'tterribletotheextreme.Afteranone-daysearch,theycollectedtwobigpilesofsticks.Then,thethreethingswerearrangedwell--Robinwatchingthesea,Tomkeepingthefireon,andJacklookingforhelp.Inthebeginning,asTomstruckthematchintothepileofsticks,theylituptheircourageandhope.However,asthedayswentbyandthefoodwasconsumedgradually,theywereoverwhelmedbyasenseofdepressionanddesperation.Gradually,thestrangethingwasapproaching."Abigboat!"Robinletoutacryofexcitedment.RobinhurriedlytookoffhisredF-shirtandshouted,"keepthefireon!Tom!"SeeingRobinwavinghisredclothes,Tominstantlyrealizedandlituptheanotherstickpile.Thethicksmokeandthebrightfiewerejusttheirfinalsignalofhope."Help!help!"theydartedtowardsthefigureoftheboatandscreamedloudlywiththeirentirestrength.Finally,theboatchangeditsinfinialchannelandadvancedtowandstheirdirection.Whentheywassavedbytheboat,theyburstintohappytearswithasenseofrelief.
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