英语作文免费批改润色 DearDave,I’mgladtohearthatyouhadgreatinterestinourschool’sbird-watchstudytour.WeheldthetourinthegateofShenZhenBayParkonlastSunday9a.m..Duringthetour,wehadthefollowingthreeactivities.Atfirst,welistenalectureonpopularsciencetolearnhowtobirdswatching.Afterthat,wetookpartinateamcooperationgametogethertorecognizebirdsandlistentobirds,it’ssofunnythatmostofusforgettoreturnontime.Finally,wewroteareportonbirdstoreportwhatwesawandwhatwegotfromthistour.Igotalotfromthetour,whichnotonlyenrichedmyknowledgeofbirdsbutalsorelaxmybodyandmind,whatameaningfultouritwas!Doyouhavesimilaractivitiesinyourschool?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply. pcxy 2024-05-31 0 评论 1 喜欢
英语作文免费批改润色 Dearfellowstudents,IamLiHua.TodayIwouldliketointroduceLiXiangtoyou,whoisordinarybutarolemodelinmyheart.LiXiangwasdisabledinhiskindergartenbecauseofanaccident,buthenevergaveupsport.Heistallandthinbutlostaneye.Nevertheless,hehasalwaysinsistedonhisdreamifbecomeanathlete,sohetrainedhimselftirelesslytoachievehergoalfinally.JustlikeLiXiang,IalsohaveadreamsinceI’makid,andI'veaspiredtobecomeateacherwhenIgrowupbutIcan’tsticktoitforlong.SoIseehimasarolemodelofmine.Ithinkitisagreatblessinginourlife.MayweallwillbeaspersistentasLiXiang.Thanksforyourlistening. pcxy 2024-05-31 0 评论 1 喜欢