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逐词逐句精细批改，不规范表达改进，详细分数分析，500字以上写作指导，全文改进
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SusanhadbeeninBanbury,England,athergrandparents'housefortwoweeks.ThedayaftershehadarrivedfromNewJersey,she'dwrittenletterstoKatie,Sasha,andMatthew."Noreplybynow.Butit'sthesummer,"shethought,"They'rebusyhangingoutatKatie'spool...orwatchingOuterBanks...orpostingselfies."Atthatmomentshesawhergrandpaapproachingthegardenwithatray（托盘）.“Sorry，Love.Nopostforyou."Hissadeyesremindedheroftheirfamilydog,Astro,whwouldarrivenextweekwhensheandherparentsmovedintotheirnewhouse."T'vebroughtyousometeaandsympathy,astheysay,"Grandpasaid.Shegazedathim,tryingtounderstandwhat"teaandsympathy"meant.Grandpaloweredthetraytothegrass，andsetthestrainer（过滤器）onalightbluechinacup.Theteapothummedsoftlyasgoldenteapouredintothecup,itsfragrancerisinglikemomingmist.Heliftedthestrainer,setitonthesecondcup,andrepeatedhismovements.Sheleanedforward,attractedbyhergrandpa'squietritual,andamazedathowskillfulhishandswere.Shecouldn'thelpbutallowahintofasmile.Grandpadroppedtwosugarcubesinthecupclosesttoher.Adelicateplatescrapedonthetrayasheshifteditclosertoher."Perhapsafewbiscuitswillmakeyourightasrain."Susanshrugged.“Couldn'thurt."Hersmilegrew."Nowthen,"Grandpabegan,"What'sthisaboutyourfriendsnotwriting...”afrcld“Iguessthey'rebusy.I'mlonelyandIneedaletterfromthem.”ItwasGrandpa'sturntoshrug."Nooffense,butthey'reteenagcrs.Theyprobablydon'tknow.”“Whatareyoutellingme?"Sheasked."Actually,I'mnotsure.”Hiseyebrowsroseslightly."Takethistea，forinstance，”Grandpasaid，“It＇sasymbolofhospitality（盛情）.WelcometoEngland，mylove."Heliftedhiscup,"Cheerstoyou.Forbeingbraveliketheseblacktealeaves."注意：（1）续写词数应为150左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Susanliftedhercupandwhispered,"ButIdon'tfeelbrave."Paragraph2:.Alonenow,shegazedatthetrayandwhispered,“WelcometoEngland."第8页／共8页Susanliftedhercupandwhispered,"ButIdon'tfeelbrave."NosoonerhadSusanutteredthewordsthanhergrandpaencouraged,"Don'tsweatit,you拼写错误havethecouragetobebraveliketheseblacktealeaves."Hearinghergrandpa'swords,Susandidn'treplyandslumpedhershouldersassheloweredherhead,immersedinherownthoughts单复数错误.AtthesightofSusan'sreaction,grandpadidn'tsayanything代词错误more.Hepouredthegoldenteaintohercup,fillingthecupwithteaagain.Subsequently,grandpagaveagentlepatonSusan'sshoulderandleft并列结构错误,leavingSusanalone.AndlittledidSusanknowthat从句错误whenhepouredtea,hergrandpaaddedsomeblacktealeavesintothetea.Alonenow,shegazedatthetrayandwhispered,"WelcometoEngland."Fixinghereyesonthetrayandthetea,herworrygraduallygavewaytoaflickerofcuriosityabout介词错误thetealeaves.Lookingattheblacktealeavesfloatingontheteawithoutfear,Susangraduallyunderstoodhergrandpa'swords,leavingastirring用词错误inherchest.Atthatmoment,thestringwhichhadpulledtightlyinher代词错误heartsuddenlysnapped-notbroken,butloosened,bringinganunprecedentedcourage.Shestoodupanddashedtowardher代词错误room,determined词性误用towritealetteragain.Aboveher代词错误head,brilliantsunlightspilledacrossthevastsky句子成分残缺.Yet,itwasgrandpa'swordsandtheblacktealeavesthattrulyilluminatedherworld.
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