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Kevinwasprettybored.Hismotherwasatwork,andhisfatherhadbeenawayonbusiness.Therefore,hewasleftinthecareofMrs.Hill,anoldladywholivednextdoor.Hisparentshadraisedthe12-year-oldtobeagoodboy.Henevergotintotrouble,thoughsometimeshewantedtodoriskythings.Mrs.Hillwasasleep.Kevinsighed(叹息)andhopedsomethingexcitingwouldhappen.Suddenly,amovementoutsidecaughthiseye.Mrs.Hill'sfrontwindowfacedMr.andMrs.Green'shouseacrossthestreet.Thecouplehadbothgonetowork,soitwasstrangethatsomeonewasoverthere.Kevinstaredatthemanattheirfrontdoor.Suddenly,themanjumpedthroughanopenwindowintothehouse.WithhisheartinhismouthKevingrabbedMrs.Hill'shomephoneandcalledthepolice.Thinkingthatthemanmightgetawaywithhewantedbeforethepolicearrived,Kevdecidedtodosomething.HerushedoutofMrs.Hill'shouseandcrossedthestreetquickly.Grabbingabranchfromacut-downtree,hejumpedinthroughthewindow."Stoprightthere!Youmustleaverightnow!"hecalledout,holdingthebranchwithbothhands.Themanfrozeforasecond,butwhenhesawtheskinnyboyhebreathedasighofrelief."Hey,kid,putthatdown.Itwasmyhome.Myparentsusedtolivehereandmyfather'swatchwashere,"heexplained,tryingtoliftafloorboard.Atthatmoment,thesoundsofapolicecarechoed(intheair.Themanstoodupinapanic,thenranthroughthehousetowardthewindowandjumpedout.Kevinfollowedoutandtoldthearrivingpoliceofficerswhathadhappened.Theypursuedandarrestedtheman.KevinwentbacktoMrs.Hill'shouse.Somehowhewasn'tsurehehaddonetherightthing."Whatifhehastoldthetruth?"hethoughttohimself.Theman'swordssoundedprettyconvincing.注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。WhenMr.andMrs.Greengothome,Kevinwenttotalktothem.KevinandMr.Greentookthewatchtheyhadfoundtothepolicestation.WhenMrandMrs.Greengothome,Kevinwenttotalktothem.AstonishedbyKevin'sbrave,Mr.Greenthankedhimappreciately.Then,afterKevintoldthemwhatthemansaid,theybecameslienceforamoment."Oh!Weboughtthishousefromanoldcouplemanyyearsago."MrsGreensaid.Then,theyfoundthefloorboardpointedbytheman.Liftingitaway,awatchwasactuallylayingthere!KevinandMrGreentookthewatchtheyhadfoundtothepolicestation.Asanimportantevidence,thewatchproofedthattheman'swordsweretrue.Afterexplaningthetruthtothepoliceman,theGreensdecidedtoforgivethemanandreturnthewatchtohimClenchingthewatch,hiseyeswasfilledbytears."Thankyousomuch."themansaidwithsobbedvoice.Finally,Kevinknewthatheactuallydidtherightthing,andittaughthimthatiskindnessthatmakestheworldgoingaround.
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