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创建于：2024-09-08 02:50:46
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Sensingtheyoungman'sconcern,Mr.Arthurdecidedtoprovehewastheowner.Withagentlesmile,Mr.Arthurdescribedthedetailsaboutthewallet:insidewasafadedphotoofhislatewife,whichwasthemostpreciousthingtohim,andhispersonalitems.Hisvoiceseemedtochokeinhisstatement.NosoonerhadJohn'shesitationgivenwaytorespectforMr.Arthur'ssinceritythanMr.Arthur'swords.Then,Johnhandedthewallettohim.Rejoicingandgrateful,Mr.Arthurclutchedthewallettightlywithhisfingersshakingslightly.Andhesaid,"Thankyou.Haditnotbeenforyourkindness,Iwouldn'thavefoundthischerishedwalletsoeasily.Pleasetakethismoney."Johnsmiledandsaid,"Noneed,Mr.Arthur.I'mJohnandI'mjustgladIcouldhelp."Subsequently,John,clearlytouchedbyMr.Arthur'sloveforhiswife,addedthatinsteadofgivingmoney,hecouldsharehisloveexperiencewithhim.Thoughfeelingaflickerofsurprise,Mr.Arthurnoddedinagreement.Standingbesidetheemptyroad,theelderlymanbegantorecallashegazedupatthenightskydottedwithnumerousstars,feelingaprofoundpeacesettledownwithinhim.Listeningquietly,JohnwascaptivatedbyMr.Arthur'sstories.Atthatmoment,theyknewthatthisunforgettableexperiencewouldbeengravedintheirhearts,servingasaneternalreminderofthemeaningofkindnessandlove..
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