搜索

热门搜索

逐词逐句精细批改，不规范表达改进，全文润色，详细评分分析，500字以上写作指导
创建于：2024-05-30 07:48:11
圈里有谁
最热
英文作文精批润色10篇
C15T1Thechartbelowshowstheresultsofasurveyaboutpeople'scoffeeandteabuyinganddrinkinghabitsinfiveAustraliancities.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.Writeatleast150words.Thebarchartdisplaysinformationaboutcitizen’spurchasinganddrinkingpreferencesoncoffeeandteainSydney,Melbourne,Brisbane,AdelaideandHobartinAustraliaoverafour-weekperiod.ItisclearthatexceptcitizenswholivedinAdelaide,mostpeopleenjoyedgoingtoacaféforhavingcoffeeortea,whereastheinstantcoffeeandthefreshcoffeewerethesecondandthethirdoptionsforcitizenstochooseinotherfourcitiesinlastfourweeks.Accordingtothebarchart,theportionofcitizenswhowenttothecaféinMelbourne,HobartandSydneyexceeded60%,followedbythefigureforBrisbaneandAdelaideataround55%and49%,respectively.ItisnoticeablethatinAdelaide,thepopularityofpurchasingtheinstantcoffeeisabithigherthanthatofhavingcoffeeincafé,withthefigurefortheinstantcoffeestoodat50%.However,inotherfourcities,theinstantcoffeewasthesecondoptionforcitizenswiththeportionofpeoplewhoboughtitwaslocatedwithintherangeof45%-55%.Movingtothepopularityofbuyingthefreshcoffee,itwastheleastpopularoptionforpeopletopickinfivecities.However,thepercentageofpeoplewhodrinkinstantcoffeeremainedabove40%inSydneyandMelbourne,whereasfiguresforBrisbaneandAdelaidewerelowerthan35%.
Belle
2025-07-03 1 评论 0 喜欢
英文作文精批润色10篇
ThegraphbelowshowsthenumberoftouristsvisitingaparticularCaribbeanislandbetween2010and2017.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.Writeatleast150words.ThelinechartillustratesthenumberofvisitorstoaspecificCaribbeanislandfrom2010to2017.Itisclearthatthetotalpopulationvisitingtheislandshowedanupwardtrendthroughouta7-yearperiod.Thisfigureincludednumbersofvisitorsstayingonislandorcruiseships,andtrendsforthesetwofiguresalsosawanoverallpositivechange.Tobeginwith,2010witnessedthetotalpopulationvisitingtheislandat1million,inwhich0.75millionlivingontheislandand0.25millionstayingoncruiseships.Thenumberofthetotalvisitorstotheislandincreasedgraduallyduring2010-2012from1millionto1.5million,thensurgedto2.75millionin2015andremainedstablein2016,intheendrocketedto3.5millionin2017.Movingtoothertwolinesforamoredetailedbreakdown.Startingfrom2011,thenumberofvisitorswhostayedontheislandincreaseddramaticallyfrom0.75millionin2011toapeakat1.5millionin2013andremainedthesamefigureinthefollowingyears,despitethefigurein2016droppedslightlyto1.3million.However,althoughthenumberoftravelersstayingoncruiseshipsclimbedto0.5millionin2011,itdecreasedto0.25millionin2012andgrewsteadilyfrom2012to2017,andreacheditspeakat2millionin2017.
Belle
2025-07-03 0 评论 0 喜欢
英文作文精批润色10篇
雅思task1:C18T2ThechartbelowshowsthenumberofhouseholdsintheUSbytheirannualincomein2007,2011and2015.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.Writeatleast150words.ThebarchartillustratesthenumberofhouseholdsinUSinyears2007,2011,2015,dividingby5groupofpeoplewhoearneddifferentrangesofannualincome.Itisclearthatthenumberofhouseholdslivedbypeoplewhoearnedlessthan$49,999peryearormorethan$100,000peryearremainedthetopthreerankingsoverthe8-yearperiod,whereasthosefiguresforrestgroupsstayedatthelowestrankings.Accordingtothebarchart,peoplewhoearnedmorethan$100,000peryearownedhighestnumberofhouseholdsatnearly30millionand34millionin2007and2015,respectively,whereasthistoprankingwassurpassedbythegroupwhoseannualincomestayedwithintherangeof$25,000-$49,000at30millionin2011.Meanwhile,thenumberofhouseholdsownedbythisgrouprankedsecondin2007and2015at27millionand28million,respectively,followingbythefigureforthegroupwhoearnedlessthan$25,000at25million,28millionand27millionin2007,2011and2015,respectively.Movingtothefiguresforpeoplewhoearnedbetween$50,000-$99,999peryear,thedataforpeopleearnedmorethan$50,000-$74,999remainedstableat21millionduringtheperiod.However,thenumberofhouseholdslivedbypeoplewhoearnedbetween$75,000-$99,999climbedslightlyfrom14millionin2007to15millionin2015.
Belle
2025-07-02 2 评论 0 喜欢
英文作文精批润色10篇
BoththereadingandthelisteningpassagedelveintotheissueoftherootcausesandprotectionstrategiesonPetrels.Significantly,thelisteningmaterialprovidesthreerulesforpeopletoaddresstheissues.First,thereadingcontentassertsthatcat,whichisthemajorpredatorofPetrels,capturesthem,leadingtotheconspicuouspopulationdeclineofthebirds.Thelisteningprovidesameasuretotacklethispredicament.Buildinguptwometershighconservativefencescannotonlypreventcatfromcrossing,butalsoallowsPetrelstostaysafety.Moreover,artificiallightssuchasneonhavedeprivedofbirds’healthylivingenvironmentsbyattractingthemtobumpintoarchitecturesandgettinghurt.Inordertodealwiththisdilemma,thelisteningarticulatesthatturn-off-lightmovementsbasedontheseasonaltransitionofbirdsisindispensable.Citizensareobligedtoattachgreatimportancetolawenforcementguidedbytheauthorities.Consequently,birdsarepreservedinacomparativelysustainableway.Finally,thespeciesisthreatenedbyfishingbehaviorssincetheyareusedtostayingatcoastlinesforfood.Fromtheperspectiveoflistening,fishermenshouldavoidfishingduringdaytime,whichisthesameperiodoftimewhenthebirdsconducttheirpredation.Night-timeworksrealizetheprotectiongoal.托福作文批改，滿分30辛苦按這個條件給分
学霸君_56
2025-07-02 1 评论 0 喜欢
英文作文精批润色10篇
托福學術寫作作文批改，請根據題目（附照片）進行精修，考試時間只有10分鐘，請將此條件納入總體字數考量（學生可寫速度在160以內）Theissueofwhethertakingriskforpersonalgrowthhassparkedaheateddebate.Giventhatnotonlydorisksprovideopportunities,buttheyalsoposechallenges,itisadvisabletorunriskinordertoexperienceaswellastoconquer.Forinstance,fiveyearsago,Iorganizedanegotiationwiththecounterpartycompanyformyboss.DeeplyasIunderstoodthatifthecommunicationwasnotwell-structuredorthecooperationwasnotachieved,Imightbefired.However,Iwantedtotryforthepurposeofdemonstratingmyability.Finally,Isucceeded,leadingtothefinalprofitincreasedby20%,andIalsogotpromotedtoahigherpositiontoshoulderlargerresponsibility.Asaresult,theprofoundimpactsonself-learningfromriskscannotbeoverstatedtome,whichtherisksallowmetoactproperlyineverymeetingswithconfidence.AlthoughIpartiallyagreewithClairethattakingtoomanyriskscannegativelyharmoneself,sheoverlooksthefactthattheoveralladvantagesoutweightheflawssinceminorrisksaremanageableandhavealowerchancetogethurt,whileothersmightmatteralotbothinbenefitsandbadsides.
学霸君_56
2025-07-02 0 评论 0 喜欢
1
关注
92
粉丝
28
获赞
圈主 学霸嘚吧嘚

批改匠官方客服

最新
一直学霸

去发现更多有趣内容